Let me have it

Bland

You have a lovely smile, but you can do better.

I am a bit quirky,..What are a couple of quirky but endearing habits of yours?
love to laugh and make others at least smile...What makes you laugh? Pranking people? British humour? The Simpsons? Or give an example of a hilarious turn of events in your quirky life.
I work and play hard....What type work? Do you like it? Whats your favorite activities to play at? Even boardgames can be competitive. Tell him.
No need to do anything half way! I am sensitive, compassionate, affectionate and loyal to my friends and family...This is good, qualities about you that you bring to the table. Should he have the same?

If you re-do it, post here that you did. I'd love to take another look.

Seems like a good catch to me.

We have a match!

No, I'm already taken.

Thanks for the advice. I will try to take care of the improvements you suggested soon.