Show me.
Don't just say it.
Leave no spaces.
Any room for doubt.
Satisfy the answer.
Before there is a question.
When it is love.
Doubt can make no reservations.
That unseen place in time.
Become my prophet.
Preach the Word.
That cannot be questioned.
No matter how many.
Grain may fall.
Life itself.
Is found without.
No restarts, no do-overs.
There is you.
Here is me.
Everything else.
Is nothing but an illusion.
People are but actors.
Playing a small part.
In the greatest story.
Never to be told.
Just love me.
Like tomorrow doesn't exist.
As if this breathe.
Will be our last.
Hold strong to this faith.
For it reflects my own.
If it truly is my heart you seek.
You will find it.
Where all beauty comes to sleep.
The serenity in days.
Yet untouched by the warmth.
Of the yet risen sun.
When I leap.
Know one thing.
I do so in absolution.
And as such.
I will not look back.
For there is no need.
My love has no vacancy.
For the blindest of objects.
An object called doubt.
Hush, my love.
Don't speak.
That has become.
Such an overused phrase.
Just show me.
For when we both land.
Doubt will be but a word.
Left in a language.
Neither of us can speak.

Midnight Reveries
Copyright (c) 2012
All Rights Reserved

So.. that means?

lol

Nice write. I could see you had an artistic mind before, and it's nice to see that it's different kind of arts you're interested in.

I consider myself to be creative/artistic, and I feel it's good for people like us to create different kinds of arts as well. Diversity is important for great art.

Keep it up.

Again an awesome write hun


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Wow, thanks for the huge compliment. :)

I don't think there isn't a 'thing' that exists that I have written about at some point or another..

I wrote one about legos when I was 10. >.<

And yeah, I love diversity.
Also helps keep people reading or interested in your work.
They aren't going to have it set in stone what you will do next.

:)

lol, I take it that it took you so long to comment..

..cause you had to find a picture? o.O

Heh..

Thanks. :)

Umm yeah that's why. Hehehe.....

It had to be the perfect one

And it helps keep your mind creative, sharpening your skills and talent.

Hush, my love.
Don't speak.
That has become.
Such an overused phrase.
Just show me.
For when we both land.
Doubt will be but a word.
Left in a language.
Neither of us can speak.



This has to be my favorite part :)

Thanks.:)

I like how I ended this one too.

Nice write Sin,,and I say,,let her first steps take that leap,
Then your know,,,she wasn't a cheat...
I really should sleep,,,,

lol

Hey it doesn't say I'll leap first..
..just says if I did, I won't look back. :D

Well, night then Tru- err..

I mean.

Terry. :D

Wow that was beautifully written theres so much feelings in your words...i loved it :)

MWAH!

:D

Thank you. :)

<3

Your very Welcome :) <3

Mr M..you can call me anything ya like,,its all good,,

I'm new here and your poem was the first topic I read. You are very talented!