Topic: Trigger
OIF_Chef's photo
Thu 02/16/12 12:39 AM
For my brother Nate (who hasn't read it)

I've been running for so long
from these demons wrapped around my soul
You preached the holy book at me
and then you turned away
now I'm goin' out to the wilderness alone
They've been chasing me for days
and I'm just trying to find my way
They gave me a number and
sent me to my cell
Now I'm running and they
will not go away
I've got one foot upon my grave
My finger's on the trigger
I walked away from your lonely world of greed
and I came up to the mountain to pray
I'm gonna leave it all behind
Sick of your filth and hypocrisy
My father's father came to me
and said son, don't be angry
when I came up to the mountain to die

Sin_and_Sorrow's photo
Thu 02/16/12 01:20 AM
Bad a**.


kc0003's photo
Thu 02/16/12 04:10 PM
nicely done...drinker

no photo
Thu 02/16/12 04:18 PM
drinker Nice write Chef, and welcome to your new home,,
and psssst,,THEY can't come here to hassle ya so its COOL..
I think your Bro,,will find this,,still another side of you he hasn't met yet..drinker

pennyg281's photo
Thu 02/16/12 04:21 PM
Very nice flowerforyou

Totage's photo
Thu 02/16/12 04:22 PM

For my brother Nate (who hasn't read it)

I've been running for so long
from these demons wrapped around my soul
You preached the holy book at me
and then you turned away
now I'm goin' out to the wilderness alone
They've been chasing me for days
and I'm just trying to find my way
They gave me a number and
sent me to my cell
Now I'm running and they
will not go away
I've got one foot upon my grave
My finger's on the trigger
I walked away from your lonely world of greed
and I came up to the mountain to pray
I'm gonna leave it all behind
Sick of your filth and hypocrisy
My father's father came to me
and said son, don't be angry
when I came up to the mountain to die


Wow, awesome write.

OIF_Chef's photo
Thu 02/16/12 09:58 PM
Thanks for the kind words everyone. Since this is my brother's story I might show it to him now. : )