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Broken and battered
Does it even matter? I keep laughing You’re getting madder Why you so serious? Hearts are meant to shatter Love or pain Always pick the latter Burning choices Scattered noises Bury your conscience And listen to the voices As we fall, trampled like roses Look outside as everyone rejoices Like falling paint; all it does is splatter Like losing faith; our souls begin to scatter Bury your heart You can never win Tear down your walls Be buried by your sin So many memories Don’t know where to begin Lies and stories Destroying me from within |
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I believe that we have all been there at some point. I am gathering my soul back up and finding strength to get on with life. Learning from the pain.
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"forgiveness is the fragrance the violet sheds on the heel that has crushed it." Mark Twain
I don't know why your poem just reminded me of that quote. Powerful images. |
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I admire your ability to be able to write about heart break, then turn around and right about love. I tell you how extremely talented I think you are, enough.
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"forgiveness is the fragrance the violet sheds on the heel that has crushed it." Mark Twain I don't know why your poem just reminded me of that quote. Powerful images. Probably because I was watching a movie with Mark Twain in it. :O But thank you. :D |
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I admire your ability to be able to write about heart break, then turn around and right about love. I tell you how extremely talented I think you are, enough. Maybe you do.. ..but I still love, adore, and value your opinions. :) |
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i like how the second paragraph visually resembles sliding down as the words describe it
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i like how the second paragraph visually resembles sliding down as the words describe it Wow.. lol I didn't even notice that. :) |
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I admire your ability to be able to write about heart break, then turn around and right about love. I tell you how extremely talented I think you are, enough. I don't think he realises how talented he is..Awesome way with words this boy.. |
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I admire your ability to be able to write about heart break, then turn around and right about love. I tell you how extremely talented I think you are, enough. I don't think he realises how talented he is..Awesome way with words this boy.. Awe, Ainjel.. Why you gotta make me blush? I hate the color red on me. |
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