Topic: Walk Forward
Nyguitarist's photo
Wed 12/21/11 06:07 AM



Her wrath sealed her doom
now from a cold and lonely room
she trembles as the skies forbid another prayer
I'm no longer there
I watch as her wishes become demands
and at the fall of her command
my anger has now dethroned her
a king of a fallen empire took his stand
One who would once walk through fire
though light of angels had then decieved
It was he who had begged for mercy
though he begged in disbelief
as winds of change brought him fortune
and the rage of guilt would bear her shame
this debt has come full circle
the swine must now repay

soufiehere's photo
Wed 12/21/11 06:10 AM
Nice :-)

no photo
Wed 12/21/11 06:11 AM




Her wrath sealed her doom
now from a cold and lonely room
she trembles as the skies forbid another prayer
I'm no longer there
I watch as her wishes become demands
and at the fall of her command
my anger has now dethroned her
a king of a fallen empire took his stand
One who would once walk through fire
though light of angels had then decieved
It was he who had begged for mercy
though he begged in disbelief
as winds of change brought him fortune
and the rage of guilt would bear her shame
this debt has come full circle
the swine must now repay


Unrequited love turns lover into foe...As always, fab write Ny!!flowers

Nyguitarist's photo
Wed 12/21/11 06:31 AM
Thank you ladies and good morning!:banana:

shanandoah's photo
Sat 12/24/11 06:42 AM
I stand in dismay of a love dethroned from grace. The skies above even fail to give its light in this cold unusual moment. The demands of her love chastised me, and even so she became dethroned from a grace that could not be. As if being thrown in the fire, I walk through pleasantly beckoning the angels to come forth. Was there a deliverance for I begged for relief and there was none. In time though the winds of change brought fortune to that where no fortune existed. My rage and anger would bear this debt to be repaid and per adventure of my grief, it has come full circle. Relief have I found in this pain of another but I shall go on and on without remorse of that which has been dethroned.

And addition to your rendition my man.