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Baby, can you see the blood on my lips?
The scent of iron, taste of copper so strong. Or do you see the curve of my smile, the brush of my hip? Come now, let's play for a while. Clouds have lifted away from me, I don't think you notice how pale I am. You whisper secrets in my ear, you breathe. Can't you feel the lack of my heart? Won't you be my bloody valentine? Expose your throat, let my teeth sink in. Baby, will you be forever mine? Be my pet on a leash, jump for me. Ten years past, and I look the same. You ask me what my secret is. I try not to smile, say time isn't to blame. Can you hear the note of scorn in my laugh. Immortality, baby, it isn't real. I pray on the wicked and the good, and I have yet to feel, an ounce of shame. Am I a pretty wife on your arm? Am I the best for you in bed? Or was the sheer amount of charm, enough to strike you dead. I'll have you in the palm of my hand, I'll make you jump when I ask. You'll put up with all the demands, becuase you too, want to live forever. Silver burns, and I haven't seen the light of day, for more then a thousand years. Once an angel, now a demon kept at bay, I whisper, "Come play with me." I caress you, your years and your frail life, I'll replace you my love, and I'll kill you with a knife. Baby, let me taste you, tonight. Let me sink my fangs in your throat. A taste too divine for words. All the liquid vanished like words from a note. When burned. Now let me to do a magic trick. I'm here then I'm gone. And you'll hardly notice the nicks, to your own throat. ------------------------------------- |
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bite me
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Haha, I don't think you'll want me to bite you. I've got a sickness in my heart.
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seriously, nice write. and your right on the bite. i'm too sensitive
but if you did want to bite me i have a strong immune system |
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Haha, my writing is almost as good as my cooking!
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if your cooking is as good as you are looking i'll need an exercise bike
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Haha, well I'm munchin' on these cookies, and the slight modification of the recipe, I have perfected it, methinks. xD
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Mon 06/27/11 07:20 AM
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Haha, well I'm munchin' on these cookies, and the slight modification of the recipe, I have perfected it, methinks. xD Nice write.... A Twilight Cookbook.....interesting. |
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Makes me think of that song,,,Once Bitten, Twice Shy!lol
Nice way to sink not only your teeth into your write,,but also your very beautiful claws as well...Great read.... And tainted is the looks and charm,, when underneath lays their traumatic harm..... |
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Nice write....
A Twilight Cookbook.....interesting. Ugh, no. If there was such a thing as a twilight cookbook I'd off myself. |
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Dripping with it.
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twilight cookbook might as well be betty crocker. the feast of immortality would need no print. love this write lunali!
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Nice
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Mon 06/27/11 01:17 PM
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Nice write....
A Twilight Cookbook.....interesting. Ugh, no. If there was such a thing as a twilight cookbook I'd off myself. Cooking 101 with Vampires & Zombies: A Twilight Cookbook.... how to prepare humans |
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