Topic: YOU BELONG WITH ME!!!!!!!!!! ( PLEASE REPLY I NEED INFO)
TheYoungPoet's photo
Thu 05/20/10 05:32 PM
IF I COULD CHANGE THE WORLD YOU WOULD BE MY GIRL.
THE MISTAKES OF THE PAST WOULD HAVE NEVER HAPPEN.
YOU WOULD BE IN MY ARMS LISTENING TO MY HEART BEAT YOUR NAME.
I'LL BE AT YOUR FEET GIVING YOU ALL YOU NEED.
WITH ME WORKING HARD TO GIVE YOU ALL YOU WANT.
IF ONLY I HAD KNOWN THAT MY ACTIONS WOULD HAVE LEAD TO THIS.
ALL THE YEARS OF HAPPINESS I'VE MISSED.
GIVE ME A CHANCE TO SHOW YOU MY SOUL.
YOU WILL LIKE WHAT YOU SEE.
IF I'M WRONG FORGIVE ME FOR WANTING.
IF I'M RIGHT FORGIVE ME FOR WAITING.
YOU KNOW WHERE YOU BELONG.
IN THE ARMS OF LOVE.
WITH THE ONE WHO LOVES.



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s1owhand's photo
Fri 05/21/10 04:29 AM
If you need to tell her
Tell her

Tell her in as many ways that you can.

No one can grade this

There are no A's for caring

And the only failure is dishonesty or
not to tell...

drinker

RowBaby's photo
Fri 05/21/10 10:32 AM
I agree with slowhand...

and I think your poem shows love and loss. I like it brokenheart

no photo
Fri 05/21/10 10:40 AM
flowers best wishes

pkh's photo
Fri 05/21/10 03:56 PM
welcome and good luck

TheYoungPoet's photo
Fri 05/21/10 06:13 PM
thanks...
i did let her know she is almost mine

no photo
Sat 05/22/10 05:36 AM
Hopefully that almost will turn into a YES and we'll see even more emotions pouring from your pen.flowerforyou