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Topic: When I think of you
Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Sat 03/13/10 10:29 PM
Everytime I look into your eyes I see it your eyes It's no surprise I'm the one that you despise I see the fire in your eyes It burns me like a thounsand candles lit You're so usure if you can handle this like canabis Just close your eyes and make a wish Imagine this Holding hands Digging our feet into the sands Kissing each other like lovers do Tell me now What will you do

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 03/14/10 09:14 AM
Their eyes will always reflect their truth,,,,Cool Write man.

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Sun 03/14/10 09:35 AM
Thanks, it was just a first write, kinda seems like a mixture of a few now that I look at it again. Maybe I'll come back and edited some day.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 03/15/10 02:24 PM
(((totage)))

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