Topic: What do you think?
ljado's photo
Mon 01/25/10 07:52 PM
Am I on the right track??

no photo
Mon 01/25/10 08:10 PM
Yes, but I think it would help to add some more about yourself, and about what you are looking for....!

And maybe a few more pictures....!

shades

soufiehere's photo
Mon 01/25/10 08:15 PM
I think you need to sex it up.
Your target audience will like the sports.
But you want to lure them by who you are.
And I can't tell.

Give a peek into exactly what motivates you.
Maybe even what kind of chap floats your boat.
And I would remove the exclamation points.
They are exhausting :-)

Pretty picture.