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Topic: "Crumble"
BYondLife's photo
Tue 10/13/09 03:37 AM
To believe in chaos.
Catatonic.
A pulse remains.
Subliminal riddles.
Intoxicating atrocites.
Burned by lies.
Scarred by dreams.
Ash and smoke blot out the sun.
Forget it.
We don't need its warmth.
Climax to possibility.
My angel speaks.
Interruption.
It's so distinct.
Yet holds no meaning.
Dust permeates.
Life drips upon the floor.
A face emerges.
A mirror of nothing.
Listen.
An empty heart.
No longer beats.
It only echoes.
Buried truths.
Choke on your name.
Not only do you plague my past.
You infect my future.
With just one memory.
My innocence is lost.
Love is redefined.
Now it's no longer you.
As I crumble.
Crumble to the sound.
Ghosts.
Fear them no longer.
Strangers will talk.
But it is just that.
Zephyrus.
Carried within the breeze.
Let them be just that.
Violent flashbacks.
To want something.
To find nothing.
Failure.
Is it all I know?
Goodbye.
And I crumble.
Crumble to that sound.

o_chosen_1's photo
Tue 10/13/09 04:44 AM
im speechless! holy ****...that never happens. lol ^_^

BYondLife's photo
Tue 10/13/09 04:53 AM

im speechless! holy ****...that never happens. lol ^_^


=]
I hope that's a good thing.
I do have a fondness to a woman's voice, ya know.

I didn't know I could have that affect tho..
Interesting. happy

BYondLife's photo
Tue 10/13/09 05:00 AM
Does this one actually make sense to you?

LAMom's photo
Tue 10/13/09 08:45 AM
Very moving write,

Failure,,, Nopeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee .... just stepping stones to a fuller inner circle

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Welcome to our home

flowerforyou

MzEm's photo
Tue 10/13/09 02:28 PM
Nice work....

BYondLife's photo
Tue 10/13/09 03:56 PM

Very moving write,

Failure,,, Nopeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee .... just stepping stones to a fuller inner circle

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Welcome to our home

flowerforyou


Aww. Thank you.
I don't know we've met.
I'mmm Myke. =]
Tho, I get called BYond all the time.
Whichever works.
Pleasure to meet you..
..and thank you for the welcome.
flowers

And thank you again MzEm. =]

kc0003's photo
Tue 10/13/09 06:06 PM
nicely done....drinker

BYondLife's photo
Tue 10/13/09 06:20 PM

nicely done....drinker


drinks

Wow.. no critiquing this time?
lol jk, thanx.
laugh

kc0003's photo
Tue 10/13/09 06:23 PM


nicely done....drinker


drinks

Wow.. no critiquing this time?
lol jk, thanx.
laugh



no i am tring to be nice today...laugh

BYondLife's photo
Tue 10/13/09 06:24 PM

no i am tring to be nice today...laugh


Brahahaha!
Good to see.
heh

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 10/13/09 06:34 PM

To believe in chaos.
Catatonic.
A pulse remains.
Subliminal riddles.
Intoxicating atrocites.
Burned by lies.
Scarred by dreams.
Ash and smoke blot out the sun.
Forget it.
We don't need its warmth.
Climax to possibility.
My angel speaks.
Interruption.
It's so distinct.
Yet holds no meaning.
Dust permeates.
Life drips upon the floor.
A face emerges.
A mirror of nothing.
Listen.
An empty heart.
No longer beats.
It only echoes.
Buried truths.
Choke on your name.
Not only do you plague my past.
You infect my future.
With just one memory.
My innocence is lost.
Love is redefined.
Now it's no longer you.
As I crumble.
Crumble to the sound.
Ghosts.
Fear them no longer.
Strangers will talk.
But it is just that.
Zephyrus.
Carried within the breeze.
Let them be just that.
Violent flashbacks.
To want something.
To find nothing.
Failure.
Is it all I know?
Goodbye.
And I crumble.
Crumble to that sound.
:thumbsup:

BYondLife's photo
Tue 10/13/09 06:43 PM

:thumbsup:


Thanx.. I uh, think?
XD

BYondLife's photo
Wed 10/14/09 03:58 AM
I am so effing hungryyyyy. :/

BYondLife's photo
Mon 10/19/09 12:57 PM

im speechless! holy ****...that never happens. lol ^_^


..where have you been? *cry*
I miss u girl......

Gossipmpm's photo
Mon 10/19/09 01:35 PM
:heart:

BYondLife's photo
Mon 10/19/09 01:50 PM
lol she's in ur heart?
Odd..

Gossipmpm's photo
Mon 10/19/09 01:53 PM
When I like a write

I leave a heart!:heart:

BYondLife's photo
Mon 10/19/09 01:58 PM
Aww. =]

Fusion99's photo
Tue 10/20/09 10:37 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: drinker drinker emoticons are so much fun, leaving mixed messages with all their best intentions. Haha, I enjoyed the write, welcome to the site.

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