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To believe in chaos.
Catatonic. A pulse remains. Subliminal riddles. Intoxicating atrocites. Burned by lies. Scarred by dreams. Ash and smoke blot out the sun. Forget it. We don't need its warmth. Climax to possibility. My angel speaks. Interruption. It's so distinct. Yet holds no meaning. Dust permeates. Life drips upon the floor. A face emerges. A mirror of nothing. Listen. An empty heart. No longer beats. It only echoes. Buried truths. Choke on your name. Not only do you plague my past. You infect my future. With just one memory. My innocence is lost. Love is redefined. Now it's no longer you. As I crumble. Crumble to the sound. Ghosts. Fear them no longer. Strangers will talk. But it is just that. Zephyrus. Carried within the breeze. Let them be just that. Violent flashbacks. To want something. To find nothing. Failure. Is it all I know? Goodbye. And I crumble. Crumble to that sound. |
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im speechless! holy ****...that never happens. lol ^_^
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im speechless! holy ****...that never happens. lol ^_^ =] I hope that's a good thing. I do have a fondness to a woman's voice, ya know. I didn't know I could have that affect tho.. Interesting. |
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Does this one actually make sense to you?
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Very moving write,
Failure,,, Nopeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee .... just stepping stones to a fuller inner circle Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Welcome to our home |
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Nice work....
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Very moving write, Failure,,, Nopeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee .... just stepping stones to a fuller inner circle Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Welcome to our home Aww. Thank you. I don't know we've met. I'mmm Myke. =] Tho, I get called BYond all the time. Whichever works. Pleasure to meet you.. ..and thank you for the welcome. And thank you again MzEm. =] |
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nicely done....
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nicely done.... Wow.. no critiquing this time? lol jk, thanx. |
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nicely done.... Wow.. no critiquing this time? lol jk, thanx. no i am tring to be nice today... |
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no i am tring to be nice today... Brahahaha! Good to see. heh |
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To believe in chaos. Catatonic. A pulse remains. Subliminal riddles. Intoxicating atrocites. Burned by lies. Scarred by dreams. Ash and smoke blot out the sun. Forget it. We don't need its warmth. Climax to possibility. My angel speaks. Interruption. It's so distinct. Yet holds no meaning. Dust permeates. Life drips upon the floor. A face emerges. A mirror of nothing. Listen. An empty heart. No longer beats. It only echoes. Buried truths. Choke on your name. Not only do you plague my past. You infect my future. With just one memory. My innocence is lost. Love is redefined. Now it's no longer you. As I crumble. Crumble to the sound. Ghosts. Fear them no longer. Strangers will talk. But it is just that. Zephyrus. Carried within the breeze. Let them be just that. Violent flashbacks. To want something. To find nothing. Failure. Is it all I know? Goodbye. And I crumble. Crumble to that sound. |
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Thanx.. I uh, think? XD |
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I am so effing hungryyyyy. :/
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im speechless! holy ****...that never happens. lol ^_^ ..where have you been? *cry* I miss u girl...... |
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lol she's in ur heart?
Odd.. |
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When I like a write
I leave a heart! |
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Aww. =]
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emoticons are so much fun, leaving mixed messages with all their best intentions. Haha, I enjoyed the write, welcome to the site.
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