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Topic: "Crumble"
BYondLife's photo
Tue 10/20/09 04:21 PM

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: drinker drinker emoticons are so much fun, leaving mixed messages with all their best intentions. Haha, I enjoyed the write, welcome to the site.


Thanks!
I, uh, think?
That was a compliment right? lol

jadday's photo
Thu 10/22/09 10:11 PM

To believe in chaos.
Catatonic.
A pulse remains.
Subliminal riddles.
Intoxicating atrocites.
Burned by lies.
Scarred by dreams.
Ash and smoke blot out the sun.
Forget it.
We don't need its warmth.
Climax to possibility.
My angel speaks.
Interruption.
It's so distinct.
Yet holds no meaning.
Dust permeates.
Life drips upon the floor.
A face emerges.
A mirror of nothing.
Listen.
An empty heart.
No longer beats.
It only echoes.
Buried truths.
Choke on your name.
Not only do you plague my past.
You infect my future.
With just one memory.
My innocence is lost.
Love is redefined.
Now it's no longer you.
As I crumble.
Crumble to the sound.
Ghosts.
Fear them no longer.
Strangers will talk.
But it is just that.
Zephyrus.
Carried within the breeze.
Let them be just that.
Violent flashbacks.
To want something.
To find nothing.
Failure.
Is it all I know?
Goodbye.
And I crumble.
Crumble to that sound.


Wow....this is awesome!

BYondLife's photo
Thu 10/22/09 10:13 PM

Wow....this is awesome!


Glad you like it.
=]

Fusion99's photo
Fri 10/23/09 05:09 PM


:thumbsup: :thumbsup: drinker drinker emoticons are so much fun, leaving mixed messages with all their best intentions. Haha, I enjoyed the write, welcome to the site.


Thanks!
I, uh, think?
That was a compliment right? lol


haha

lol she's in ur heart?
Odd..


I was being a smartass about this right here, Gossip always leaves heartslaugh laugh But yeah, nice poem.drinker

BYondLife's photo
Fri 10/23/09 08:28 PM
Ohh, I gotcha, lol.
Sorry, lot on my mind.
And thanx. =]

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