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He is with me
every single day He always talks to me Makes me happy in every way He is handsome his smile is enigmatic His appearance was winsome and his eyes twinkle like magic He is a comfort He was my rock Hours of building a secret fort and late nights of endless talk I never knew what he did or where he was from What he was like a kid Or even if he was one Through out the years He stayed young He always stayed near when I had no one People started to whisper she is just a kid But my friend was always happy, a good listener Until I realized he didn't exist, he never did |
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I don't know whether to or . I like this poem.
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that was really good ^_^
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oo-writer, nicely done! You hear about people staying in touch with their inner child, hmmmm............this provokes curiosity hmmmm, I wonder if someone was extremely sensitive if they could tap into the inner child of another? hmmmmmm
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He is with me every single day He always talks to me Makes me happy in every way He is handsome his smile is enigmatic His appearance was winsome and his eyes twinkle like magic He is a comfort He was my rock Hours of building a secret fort and late nights of endless talk I never knew what he did or where he was from What he was like a kid Or even if he was one Through out the years He stayed young He always stayed near when I had no one People started to whisper she is just a kid But my friend was always happy, a good listener Until I realized he didn't exist, he never did |
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Invisible friends. I remember those days. It was so much easier to entertain myself when I had those friends that listened.
Great Write |
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Invisible friends. I remember those days. It was so much easier to entertain myself when I had those friends that listened. Great Write Thanx, but the girl in this didn't think he was invisible until people told her he was |
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