Topic: Love died today | |
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It was time to let things go No more strings around my heart A decision I struggled with for so long That almost tore me apart It was 11:54 this morning When love quietly slipped away; Taking one last shallow breath As I bowed my head to pray, Many memories left behind Of the days when love was strong And I found comfort and safety In the arms where I belonged But love on mere memories alone Just cant be sustained So as time went by you see Only the memories remained- So with a sad heart and fond goodbye I bid my love farewell As it was buried some where deep In its cold and hardened shell. Its time to cross over now And stand on solid ground Bury what’s been dying for so long To go where hope is found Here lies love that was true But finally laid to rest When It died it was so sad But I gave it all my best. 9-22-09 |
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Nice write
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That is lovely! Nice job
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wonderful writing...
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It was time to let things go No more strings around my heart A decision I struggled with for so long That almost tore me apart It was 11:54 this morning When love quietly slipped away; Taking one last shallow breath As I bowed my head to pray, Many memories left behind Of the days when love was strong And I found comfort and safety In the arms where I belonged But love on mere memories alone Just cant be sustained So as time went by you see Only the memories remained- So with a sad heart and fond goodbye I bid my love farewell As it was buried some where deep In its cold and hardened shell. Its time to cross over now And stand on solid ground Bury what’s been dying for so long To go where hope is found Here lies love that was true But finally laid to rest When It died it was so sad But I gave it all my best. 9-22-09 |
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I like this, I have one whos never going to be ok,
just hoping it fades. Some are tougher than others. Thanks for this. |
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Wow! Amazing!! thank you for sharing this
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Thanks guys- your feedback is greatly appreciated.
Only write whats in my heart-Glad you liked it. GEL |
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A wonderful write
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