Topic: Shadow of death. | |
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Edited by
redhead44613
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Fri 08/21/09 05:08 PM
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As I walk with the shadow of death I fear no pain.
I know he will make it fast. The knife pierces my skin, as I moan in pleasure. This pain familial to me. Blood drips down my chest, the warmth feels like extacy on my cold fragile skin. A grin plays across his thin lips, I know he finds pleasure in this. The power I gave to him, he will abuse. The knife cuts deeper, I can't help but scream from pleasure. Please end this now, take my life. I can feel the knife ripping my heart, "yes" is all I can moan out. The room grows darker, all I hear is a faint laugh. I fall to the floor, only to lay in my own blood. Death is above me now, the only thing I ever wanted. Do you understand what you did to me, the moment you said goodbye? Redhead44613 |
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nice!! i'm with ya
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for some reason I am in the mood to write. which does not happen often, an also in a very very dark mood.. look out!
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for some reason I am in the mood to write. which does not happen often, an also in a very very dark mood.. look out! |
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for some reason I am in the mood to write. which does not happen often, an also in a very very dark mood.. look out! thank you fabo |
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for some reason I am in the mood to write. which does not happen often, an also in a very very dark mood.. look out! thank you fabo WELL I think that it is good I think that if know one likes it they can kiss *** ok. |
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Of course I like it sweetie!
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thanks guys.
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thanks guys. |
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Of course I like it sweetie! |
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thanks guys. |
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A little dark for me but a very well written piece. I felt like I was living each moment of it.
BP |
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A little dark for me but a very well written piece. I felt like I was living each moment of it. BP |
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Dang girl... WOW! Powerful!... excellent write!...
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Dang girl... WOW! Powerful!... excellent write!... |
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Dang girl... WOW! Powerful!... excellent write!... |
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Dang girl... WOW! Powerful!... excellent write!... |
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Dang girl... WOW! Powerful!... excellent write!... |
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