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Topic: Shadow of death.
redhead44613's photo
Fri 08/21/09 05:08 PM
Edited by redhead44613 on Fri 08/21/09 05:08 PM
As I walk with the shadow of death I fear no pain.
I know he will make it fast.

The knife pierces my skin,
as I moan in pleasure.
This pain familial to me.
Blood drips down my chest,
the warmth feels like extacy on my cold fragile skin.

A grin plays across his thin lips,
I know he finds pleasure in this.
The power I gave to him,
he will abuse.

The knife cuts deeper,
I can't help but scream from pleasure.
Please end this now,
take my life.

I can feel the knife ripping my heart,
"yes" is all I can moan out.
The room grows darker,
all I hear is a faint laugh.

I fall to the floor,
only to lay in my own blood.
Death is above me now,
the only thing I ever wanted.

Do you understand what you did to me,
the moment you said goodbye?

Redhead44613

bedlum1's photo
Fri 08/21/09 05:19 PM
nice!! i'm with yablushing

redhead44613's photo
Fri 08/21/09 05:27 PM
for some reason I am in the mood to write. which does not happen often, an also in a very very dark mood.. look out!

fabo123's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:07 PM

for some reason I am in the mood to write. which does not happen often, an also in a very very dark mood.. look out!
YES thats good I like it ok I think that its good ok.flowerforyou glasses :smile:

redhead44613's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:09 PM


for some reason I am in the mood to write. which does not happen often, an also in a very very dark mood.. look out!
YES thats good I like it ok I think that its good ok.flowerforyou glasses :smile:
thank you fabo

Gossipmpm's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:13 PM
bigsmile

fabo123's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:14 PM



for some reason I am in the mood to write. which does not happen often, an also in a very very dark mood.. look out!
YES thats good I like it ok I think that its good ok
.flowerforyou glasses :smile:
thank you fabo
WELL I think that it is good I think that if know one likes it they can kiss *** ok.flowerforyou glasses :smile:

fabo123's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:29 PM

bigsmile
SO you like it its good aint it.flowerforyou glasses :smile:

Gossipmpm's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:32 PM
Of course I like it sweetie!

redhead44613's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:33 PM
blushing thanks guys.

fabo123's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:51 PM

blushing thanks guys.
Well I think that its good and dont care what every one else tanks ok.flowerforyou glasses :smile:

fabo123's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:54 PM

Of course I like it sweetie!
OH you do like it then im sorry ok I think that its good ok.flowerforyou glasses :smile:

redhead44613's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:56 PM


blushing thanks guys.
Well I think that its good and dont care what every one else tanks ok.flowerforyou glasses :smile:



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bropoet's photo
Fri 08/21/09 08:00 PM
A little dark for me but a very well written piece. I felt like I was living each moment of it.

BP

redhead44613's photo
Fri 08/21/09 08:01 PM

A little dark for me but a very well written piece. I felt like I was living each moment of it.

BP
thanks

LightVoice's photo
Fri 08/21/09 08:07 PM
Dang girl... WOW! Powerful!... excellent write!... flowerforyou

redhead44613's photo
Fri 08/21/09 08:08 PM

Dang girl... WOW! Powerful!... excellent write!... flowerforyou
flowerforyou thanks

fabo123's photo
Fri 08/21/09 08:16 PM

Dang girl... WOW! Powerful!... excellent write!... flowerforyou
SO you liked it, cause I think that its good thats why im on hear ok.flowerforyou glasses :smile:

fabo123's photo
Fri 08/21/09 08:21 PM


Dang girl... WOW! Powerful!... excellent write!... flowerforyou
flowerforyou thanks
YES I like it I think that one of the thinks that your good at ok but I saw that a black guy likes it to dont he or what ok.flowerforyou glasses :smile:

fabo123's photo
Sat 08/22/09 05:48 PM


Dang girl... WOW! Powerful!... excellent write!... flowerforyou
flowerforyou thanks
WELL I hope your schooling gose good ok and I think alot like you do about meeting and we will hit it off ok cause we get in to doing alot of the same stuff ok.flowerforyou glasses :smile:

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