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Edited by
WolfEyez
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Mon 08/10/09 05:36 PM
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The hours pass by and I still fail to sleep.
These thoughts are out of control and running deep. A parade of questions are clouding my mind And a glance at the clock lets me know there's still time. When, where, why and how? I've never demanded answers like I am doing right now. What was it exactly that had me hating him so young? What was it exactly that kept his name off my tongue? Where was his conscious through this whole ordeal? Or does he not possess one since it's evident he doesn't feel? Why didn't he ever speak that one important phrase? It is the one question that always has me in a haze. And last, but not least: ( This last one is a beast) How did I end up with a "father" like you? It is not I, but you who needs a psychiatric review. |
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liked it, it was poinant.
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Thank you
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grave yard blues. and i love the write
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nice one
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Thanks, guys.
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Does ANYONE have any suggestions? I have so many untitled poems already ... I don't need more
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Questions on parade... (Title)
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how about "i love you unsaid"
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Unjust lineage, dejected spawn, regurgitated childhood.... yeah, I listen to too many death metal bands. How 'bout "I'll take bad parentage for 3:00am, Alex" |
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Unjust lineage, dejected spawn, regurgitated childhood.... yeah, I listen to too many death metal bands. How 'bout "I'll take bad parentage for 3:00am, Alex" Huh. Oh wow. |
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dont know the whole story here...how about...
the walking man? empty silence? i dont know... sorry, i tried to help |
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how about "i love you unsaid" That last word gave me a title. What do you think about Unsaid Words? |
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dont know the whole story here...how about... the walking man? empty silence? i dont know... sorry, i tried to help I appreciate the help, love. |
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Edited by
robert1652
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Mon 08/10/09 07:53 PM
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Does ANYONE have any suggestions? I have so many untitled poems already ... I don't need more Nice write by the way |
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