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Edited by
a_prettyredrose
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Mon 05/25/09 02:57 AM
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A single tear in the corner of her eye that never falls
A single tear in her eye that watch him kiss her and hold her tide.. That never falls...... A single tear as she watch true loving walking down the street holding hands That never falls..... A single tear as she watchs the couple a few tables away so very much in love and happy That never falls...... A single tear as she drives home..knowing no one is waiting there for her..... That never falls..... A single tear as she curls up to read that romantic noval...wishing the story was her happy ending. That never falls..... But.... When the light go off..... As she lays there alone..... A single tear rolls down her check and fall on her pillow and it not alone....... |
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WOW! WOW! WOW!
That was phenomenal, and it entaled some of my thoughts about other couple having succeeding relationships in the midst of my life. Amazing words, thanks for sharing your poetry, PrettyredRose 
-yosef |
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Thank you...I think we all feel like that one time or other.
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It felt like you were reading my mind today, when you wrote that....
Very touching.
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So very true, can i post a reaction poem of mine to that please?
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Reaction poem to "A single tear"
-A spirit of hope- A few blue moons since A few rainy days back In this pained heart Where shadows of people traced the snow Where uncanny love left a trail Of unrelenting storms Hand in hand as they strolled As end destined to become the past Several sunny days thereafter When the doused soul wavered It seized to mourn; nor indulge in laughter, For telling time had lost its flavor Time told no less than one could bear of unrequited love in a mirage down yonder this blind soul, that deaf heart this dam*ed spirit, that sold itself the heart saw, the soul heard the mind do thy bidding Whilst I sit here and ponder, if thee restless heart can last much longer... |
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So very true, can i post a reaction poem of mine to that please? Nice |
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It felt like you were reading my mind today, when you wrote that.... Very touching.
It came from the heart |
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A meltdown is a simple, powerful word. Everything can melt-ask the sun nourishing loving destructive parent to our fears. A life divided is wax patiently waiting on hot coals for its own demise hoping to become the treasured piece of art that some are so capable of finding in the ashes of past ruins conditioned solely in order to keep their memory--a blind thing that gives us a reason to step out of the flames.
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Beautiful write a_prr
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Thank you
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A single tear in the corner of her eye that never falls A single tear in her eye that watch him kiss her and hold her tide.. That never falls...... A single tear as she watch true loving walking down the street holding hands That never falls..... A single tear as she watchs the couple a few tables away so very much in love and happy That never falls...... A single tear as she drives home..knowing no one is waiting there for her..... That never falls..... A single tear as she curls up to read that romantic noval...wishing the story was her happy ending. That never falls..... But.... When the light go off..... As she lays there alone..... A single tear rolls down her check and fall on her pillow and it not alone....... I think you know it is a good poem when you catch your mind drifting to your memories of similar feelings as you read each line. Powerfull! |
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I think you know it is a good poem when you catch your mind drifting to your memories of similar feelings as you read each line. Powerfull! That's so true....Thank you...It's all from the heart.... |
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Edited by
MsTeddyBear2u
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Sat 05/30/09 06:13 AM
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Very good heart felt write!
Have been there in those emotions myself. Especially the "watching a couple"s part. |
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Very good heart felt write!
Have been there in those emotions myself. Especially the "watching a couple"s part. I'm still to be on the other side |
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A single tear in the corner of her eye that never falls A single tear in her eye that watch him kiss her and hold her tide.. That never falls...... A single tear as she watch true loving walking down the street holding hands That never falls..... A single tear as she watchs the couple a few tables away so very much in love and happy That never falls...... A single tear as she drives home..knowing no one is waiting there for her..... That never falls..... A single tear as she curls up to read that romantic noval...wishing the story was her happy ending. That never falls..... But.... When the light go off..... As she lays there alone..... A single tear rolls down her check and fall on her pillow and it not alone.......
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A single tear in the corner of her eye that never falls A single tear in her eye that watch him kiss her and hold her tide.. That never falls...... A single tear as she watch true loving walking down the street holding hands That never falls..... A single tear as she watchs the couple a few tables away so very much in love and happy That never falls...... A single tear as she drives home..knowing no one is waiting there for her..... That never falls..... A single tear as she curls up to read that romantic noval...wishing the story was her happy ending. That never falls..... But.... When the light go off..... As she lays there alone..... A single tear rolls down her check and fall on her pillow and it not alone....... I think you know it is a good poem when you catch your mind drifting to your memories of similar feelings as you read each line. Powerfull! That is so true....Thank you |
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Wonderful write...just wonderful.
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