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Topic: A single tear that's not alone
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Wed 09/09/09 12:59 AM

Wonderful write...just wonderful.
Thank you...it from the heart

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Wed 09/09/09 01:01 AM
Edited by a_prettyredrose on Wed 09/09/09 01:06 AM

Wonderful write...just wonderful.
Thank you.

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Wed 09/09/09 01:02 AM

Wonderful write...just wonderful.
Thank you...it's from the heart

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Wed 09/09/09 01:02 AM
This is wonderful indeed. drinker flowerforyou

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Thu 10/28/10 08:47 PM

Reaction poem to "A single tear"

-A spirit of hope-

A few blue moons since
A few rainy days back
In this pained heart
Where shadows of people traced the snow
Where uncanny love left a trail
Of unrelenting storms
Hand in hand as they strolled
As end destined to become the past

Several sunny days thereafter
When the doused soul wavered
It seized to mourn; nor indulge in laughter,
For telling time had lost its flavor

Time told no less than one could bear
of unrequited love in a mirage down yonder
this blind soul, that deaf heart
this dam*ed spirit, that sold itself
the heart saw, the soul heard
the mind do thy bidding
Whilst I sit here and ponder,
if thee restless heart can last much longer...




That is truly a amazing poem that hit the soul

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Thu 10/28/10 08:58 PM


Reaction poem to "A single tear"

-A spirit of hope-

A few blue moons since
A few rainy days back
In this pained heart
Where shadows of people traced the snow
Where uncanny love left a trail
Of unrelenting storms
Hand in hand as they strolled
As end destined to become the past

Several sunny days thereafter
When the doused soul wavered
It seized to mourn; nor indulge in laughter,
For telling time had lost its flavor

Time told no less than one could bear
of unrequited love in a mirage down yonder
this blind soul, that deaf heart
this dam*ed spirit, that sold itself
the heart saw, the soul heard
the mind do thy bidding
Whilst I sit here and ponder,
if thee restless heart can last much longer...




That is truly a amazing poem that hit the soul




wow, 17 months later....now that's what i call a delayed reaction!

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