Topic: A single tear that's not alone | |
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Wonderful write...just wonderful. |
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Edited by
a_prettyredrose
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Wed 09/09/09 01:06 AM
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Wonderful write...just wonderful. |
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Wonderful write...just wonderful. |
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This is wonderful indeed.
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Reaction poem to "A single tear" -A spirit of hope- A few blue moons since A few rainy days back In this pained heart Where shadows of people traced the snow Where uncanny love left a trail Of unrelenting storms Hand in hand as they strolled As end destined to become the past Several sunny days thereafter When the doused soul wavered It seized to mourn; nor indulge in laughter, For telling time had lost its flavor Time told no less than one could bear of unrequited love in a mirage down yonder this blind soul, that deaf heart this dam*ed spirit, that sold itself the heart saw, the soul heard the mind do thy bidding Whilst I sit here and ponder, if thee restless heart can last much longer... That is truly a amazing poem that hit the soul |
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Reaction poem to "A single tear" -A spirit of hope- A few blue moons since A few rainy days back In this pained heart Where shadows of people traced the snow Where uncanny love left a trail Of unrelenting storms Hand in hand as they strolled As end destined to become the past Several sunny days thereafter When the doused soul wavered It seized to mourn; nor indulge in laughter, For telling time had lost its flavor Time told no less than one could bear of unrequited love in a mirage down yonder this blind soul, that deaf heart this dam*ed spirit, that sold itself the heart saw, the soul heard the mind do thy bidding Whilst I sit here and ponder, if thee restless heart can last much longer... That is truly a amazing poem that hit the soul wow, 17 months later....now that's what i call a delayed reaction! |
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