Topic: Rate My....Story?
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Mon 01/26/09 05:10 PM
I've never done this before, but....

Just wondering if there's anyone here who would be interested in reading a short story I wrote (yesterday and today) called "Specialized" -- it's about a guy who gets divorced and is talked into trying a dating site to meet someone new.

If it was shorter, I would just post it here for the usual feedback, but as it came out to 18 pages, I think that's a bit more than I want to post at one time.

I'm planning on using the story in my fifth book, which, under the current but highly-malleable schedule, looks like it won't be out until sometime next year....



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Mon 01/26/09 05:13 PM
I'll read it!

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Mon 01/26/09 05:16 PM
I'd be honoured.flowerforyou Caveat, I'm more a science/nonfiction geek type. Still, I think, from what I've been thus far exposed to of your work, I'd rather enjoy it, Lex. Do you need an email addy?

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Mon 01/26/09 05:19 PM

I'd be honoured.flowerforyou Caveat, I'm more a science/nonfiction geek type. Still, I think, from what I've been thus far exposed to of your work, I'd rather enjoy it, Lex. Do you need an email addy?


Yeah, that would probably be a good idea....! I don't know if it will fit in site e-mail, but I suppose I could try....!

Update: It DOES fit in an on-site e-mail!

This story has NO sci-fi in it at all, except for the dating site matching question about "What would you do if you saw a robot torturing a baboon?"



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Mon 01/26/09 05:28 PM
rofl rofl rofl

Worse part, I read it first as saying "robot torturing balloon." Oh, this is going to be good!

Not sci-fi, silly, science. I'm a life sciences, etc. geek. Info hound type. spock

Sending email addies to you now. Better that way for me too. That way I can print it and better enjoy, yes? Promise to only view it myself.shades

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Mon 01/26/09 05:30 PM

rofl rofl rofl

Worse part, I read it first as saying "robot torturing balloon." Oh, this is going to be good!

Not sci-fi, silly, science. I'm a life sciences, etc. geek. Info hound type. spock

Sending email addies to you now. Better that way for me too. That way I can print it and better enjoy, yes? Promise to only view it myself.shades


I did notice that through site e-mail, it appears to remove all the italics and bolds and stuff. It may be a little weird that way, since I do a lot of internal monologue in italics. But I think it's still comprehensible.



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Tue 01/27/09 03:58 AM
would enjoy reading and offering my thoughts

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Tue 01/27/09 04:05 AM
Hi, Lexflowerforyou

I would enjoy reading anything you have written.
I am still in the middle of your first book. It has a spot next to me in bed everynite...blushing
Just need to confess that.:heart:
I will send you my email address.

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Tue 01/27/09 07:52 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Lex,, I have finished both your books and now my daughter is reading them,,,, Daniel read the first one and so enjoyed it,,, I can't wait for book #3,

Whoooooooooooooooo flowers


And thanks for the Blurbbbbbbbbbbb

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Tue 01/27/09 08:40 AM
I would love to read it, too.flowerforyou

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Tue 01/27/09 09:04 AM
Please send I would love to read it!

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Tue 01/27/09 09:17 AM
Good work, Lex! waving flowerforyou

Just read it and sent you an email w/ my thoughts. Wanted to note that here - as they don't always make it on this sight.

Let me know if you don't get it.

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Tue 01/27/09 10:04 AM

Good work, Lex! waving flowerforyou

Just read it and sent you an email w/ my thoughts. Wanted to note that here - as they don't always make it on this sight.

Let me know if you don't get it.


Thank you! -- I did get the e-mail and I'm playing around with some of the ideas. BTW, I ended up sending the story to you twice, once on here and once using one of the other addresses....!

I have sent the story to everyone on the thread who expressed interest in reading it. I thank you all, and look forward to your comments!


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Tue 01/27/09 10:37 AM
Lex, just checked my email and I did get that one too. Thanx.

Opening it reminded me to comment that, I loved the ending! Most definitely keep that.

Let me know how it goes!

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Tue 01/27/09 10:41 AM
Mail sent.

I really loved it, thank you.flowers

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Tue 01/27/09 05:14 PM
Lex,

Just finished it. I enjoyed it. :heart:
Sending you an email.
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


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Tue 01/27/09 05:25 PM
I would love to read it...

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Tue 01/27/09 06:28 PM
Loved it,,, you got mail flowers

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Tue 01/27/09 08:19 PM
Is it too late to get a copy of your short story? I just got home from a basketball game!

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Wed 01/28/09 11:11 AM
I will send it out to the latecomers sometime this afternoon!

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