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Topic: What do you all think?
Nakedsoul Joined Mon 01/12/09 Posts: 5	Mon 01/12/09 09:14 PM
I was lost in her touch... she stole my breath and robbed my soul.

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Mon 01/12/09 09:19 PM
I was lost in her touch... she stole my breath and robbed my soul. Sounds like a poem about most guys I think... but very nice

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Mon 01/12/09 09:22 PM
I have an STD. And I want to spread it. That's really scary...on 18 levels....quickly runs from the room

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 01/12/09 09:25 PM Edited by MirrorMirror on Mon 01/12/09 09:27 PM
Thanks mods

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 01/12/09 09:27 PM
I was lost in her touch... she stole my breath and robbed my soul. nice

WWRange Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 1538	Mon 01/12/09 09:27 PM
I was lost in her touch... she stole my breath and robbed my soul. Happens more than we like. Nice, I liked this

WWRange Joined Mon 12/08/08 Posts: 1538	Mon 01/12/09 09:28 PM
Thanks mods I agree.

directandwrite Joined Thu 09/11/08 Posts: 6638	Mon 01/12/09 09:29 PM
Thanks mods Touche!

shadowprincessx Joined Sat 12/27/08 Posts: 153	Mon 01/12/09 10:23 PM
nice

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 01/13/09 05:32 AM
nice and welcome

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 01/13/09 10:31 AM
I was lost in her touch... she stole my breath and robbed my soul.

Nakedsoul Joined Mon 01/12/09 Posts: 5	Fri 01/16/09 11:56 AM
thank you

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Fri 01/16/09 12:01 PM
It definitely gets the "uhhhh-sucked in breath" of the moment across.

Jess642 Joined Sat 03/31/07 Posts: 22732	Fri 01/16/09 12:41 PM
She robbed my soul.... ...of all the doubts, of all the fears and parts that don't belong. With the theft of my breath... ...she gave me the pause of life within the perfect stillness. Being lost in her touch.... ...brought me home to myself no longer a wanderer of wrongful destinations.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Fri 01/16/09 02:14 PM
I want to love you but I better not Touch (Don't touch) I want to hold you but my senses Tell me to stop I want to kiss you but I want it too Much (Too much) I want to taste you but your lips Are venomous poison I don't want to break these chains Poison Runnin deep inside my veins, Its poison http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1RRY0R0Xgl0

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 01/17/09 01:24 AM
I have an STD. And I want to spread it. That's really scary...on 18 levels....quickly runs from the room COULD ANYONE HELP ME HERE?? I see that directandwrite QUOTED here,,,,BUT FROM WHERE??? I have seen this happen before and I FIND NO reply above her's as to WHERE she was even ABLE to QUOTE it..because it doesn't show on my screen anyway????? Anybody enlighten me here??

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