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The alarm
Not due For another few hours Eyes Half focused Watching The minutes. Slowly…. Slowly…. Wishing for sleep Wishing for quiet Thoughts In endless waves Of chatter. Finally That click The telltale sign Before the radio Starts to play Announcing The time To start Faking it. Feet barely touching The ground The face in the mirror A stranger Going Through the motions Secretly wondering How long is too long To stay in pyjamas. Senses dulled Water beading Off a numb body No loofa Can remove The rough Residue of Indifference. Caught In the wake Of your Self-inflicted Sabotage… |
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The alarm Not due For another few hours Eyes Half focused Watching The minutes. Slowly…. Slowly…. Wishing for sleep Wishing for quiet Thoughts In endless waves Of chatter. Finally That click The telltale sign Before the radio Starts to play Announcing The time To start Faking it. Feet barely touching The ground The face in the mirror A stranger Going Through the motions Secretly wondering How long is too long To stay in pyjamas. Senses dulled Water beading Off a numb body No loofa Can remove The rough Residue of Indifference. Caught In the wake Of your Self-inflicted Sabotage…  nice
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so glad you posted it
as i said before...this is wonderfully done... pure of heart and openly emotive 
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Very nice, ArtGurl...sounds like you read my mind with this one...
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WOW! Intense
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 HEY,,,,wake up.....YOUR going to be late....
OK,,,OK,,,Im UP!!! No your not,,,your still horizontal come on up,up... Good poem....
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very nice
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"Senses dulled
Water beading Off a numb body No loofa Can remove The rough Residue of Indifference. Caught In the wake Of your Self-inflicted Sabotage… " Very powerful...
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Oh honey....
I hear you.....never far away, lovely. 
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(((Art)))
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Senses dulled Water beading Off a numb body No loofa Can remove The rough Residue of Indifference. This is very good! The entire poem is great, but these are my favorite lines. It's evocative; I've been there. Thank you for sharing! |
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Most excellent! Oh bother - you know how I mean that, well depicted.......
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The alarm Not due For another few hours Eyes Half focused Watching The minutes. Slowly…. Slowly…. Wishing for sleep Wishing for quiet Thoughts In endless waves Of chatter. Finally That click The telltale sign Before the radio Starts to play Announcing The time To start Faking it. Feet barely touching The ground The face in the mirror A stranger Going Through the motions Secretly wondering How long is too long To stay in pyjamas. Senses dulled Water beading Off a numb body No loofa Can remove The rough Residue of Indifference. Caught In the wake Of your Self-inflicted Sabotage… Been there more times than I can count. You've definitely got this one down my gorgeous gurl.
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(((mirror))) sweet of you to stop by. Thank you!
(((Kev))) you know I always appreciate your comments
(((Direct))) Thank you for reading and for your comments
(((Tanya))) hugs girl
(((Kim))) Thank you
(((S1ow))) Always
(((Terry))) OMG I'm up, I'm up ...  Thanks Terry 
(((Pkh))) Thank you for stopping by
(((Angel))) it is always special when you stop by
(((Jess))) Thank you lovely ... duct tape
(((Teddy))) I have been missing you.
(((Raz))) Thank you! Pleased to meet you - and welcome!
(((DKW))) I know what you meant - thank you
(((MsWiz))) you shouldn't have to count these lovely wizard
I appreciate all of you who read ... and those of you who commented. Thank you!
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Reminding you just how precious you are,
Namaste Beautiful one Love & Light
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WOW NICE
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Free the anxiety of the Soul
Love & Light Sending you Strength and warmth I miss our silence
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