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The first time given
Young and nieve the dream to be livin divorced, one child built a box locked away heartless life there to stay Second time I take it out only part is needed seems more like a boxing bout divorced twice, second child back in the box locked away heartless life world at bay Third times a charm smaller piece given should have heard the alarm divorced times three, three children back to the box locked away heartless life be as it may Fourth time realeased this is the one amount given increased divorced times four,twins plus three now in the box sealed away heartless life there to stay Take the box from the shelf open it and concider examine the remnants of myself close it tight, locked and sealed Now in the box sealed away heartless life here to stay Take it to the mountains of my mind bury it beneath the rocks and snow make it immpossible to find return to my place in life Now in the box beried away heartless life till my dieing day |
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Way too sad!!! But good writing!!
 
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Wow! Intense Write!
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Excellent Write.
"Take it to the mountains of my mind bury it beneath the rocks and snow make it immpossible to find return to my place in life"  Great visual.
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THX all I try to put myself out there raw as it may be
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good job, awesome
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The first time given Young and nieve the dream to be livin divorced, one child built a box locked away heartless life there to stay Second time I take it out only part is needed seems more like a boxing bout divorced twice, second child back in the box locked away heartless life world at bay Third times a charm smaller piece given should have heard the alarm divorced times three, three children back to the box locked away heartless life be as it may Fourth time realeased this is the one amount given increased divorced times four,twins plus three now in the box sealed away heartless life there to stay Take the box from the shelf open it and concider examine the remnants of myself close it tight, locked and sealed Now in the box sealed away heartless life here to stay Take it to the mountains of my mind bury it beneath the rocks and snow make it immpossible to find return to my place in life Now in the box beried away heartless life till my dieing day Sheer and utter, tragic beauty! You definitely revealed the jagged edge scars still weeping. Reminds me so much of myself and one I wrote, sigh Both seem straight from that Akashic Record on high, Or is it far below, beneath stillwaters... 
Thank you...  
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Excellent Write.
"Take it to the mountains of my mind bury it beneath the rocks and snow make it immpossible to find return to my place in life" Great visual.
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THX again everyone. some might hesitate to post something like this but I have always been a heart on my sleeve person.
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...Damn good write.
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THX all I try to put myself out there raw as it may be I hear Desitin works fairly well on the "raw" spots...nice illumination of your current self...but never say never... |
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Very powerful wrenching write. Great job.
 
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Edited by
txmomof2
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Wed 01/07/09 05:18 PM
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Take the box from the shelf
open it and concider examine the remnants of myself close it tight, locked and sealed  (((ERIC)))
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I like, I like!
its a song, don't you think? |
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I like, I like! its a song, don't you think? LOL I am working it for my mandolin |
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I like, I like! its a song, don't you think? LOL I am working it for my mandolin 
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