Topic: "Heavenly Light"
sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sun 04/15/07 02:23 PM
"Heavenly Light"

Wondering round in the dark
not knowing where to turn
stump a toe on the edge of the bed
cursing and yelling to no avail
to turn on the light would be so simple
but its easier to stay in the dark
simpler to not know what lurks in the shadows
hiding in fear, afraid of the light...
Pulling the blanket up to my chin
sivering and cold
tho the night is warm
ice cold fingers reaching out
embracing me through the dark
frightened and unyielding
frigid and cold
piercing straight to my soul...
exhausted and tired
finally I cry out
take away this pain...
please...
make it go away...
sins confessed,
tears rolling down,
forgiveness is free
if only you ask...
and in an instant
light shines through
warming me from the inside out
no more fear
no more fright
only bright
warm and comforting light...

Wanda/SCG 4-15-2007

rarerose's photo
Sun 04/15/07 02:27 PM
beautiful flowerforyou

bibby7's photo
Sun 04/15/07 02:27 PM
I liked that, very much..Sweet Country Girl.:flowerforyou

Do you do rhyming poems, as well? : drinker

Mstweetie's photo
Sun 04/15/07 02:30 PM
Awesome. I really enjoyed this one.flowerforyou

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sun 04/15/07 02:31 PM
thanks K...{{{HUG}}}

and yes, bibby7...I do..just a little rusty right now...flowerforyou

thank you! flowerforyou flowerforyou

bibby7's photo
Sun 04/15/07 02:36 PM
Dang..One typo and my name is shot!!!laugh

Oh well, C'est la vie..

Would you please message me when you post a rhyming one, Wanda?
flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Sun 04/15/07 02:47 PM
Very, very nice SCG.flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Wed 04/18/07 08:14 PM
Beautiful flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 04/19/07 04:56 AM
Awesome one girl really like this one.bigsmile

no photo
Thu 04/19/07 05:45 AM
wow sweets!! NOICE.. happy lived thru it with ya lil one :wink:


hugs :heart: smooched
mamma Z