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      I give away,
 
  My heart and soul. Night and day To be happy, my goal. Put it all on the line And, tell you I love you. Hold on to the hope, it'll only take time But, in reality theres nothin' I can do. Even told you to move and marry me. Offered to help raise a possible unborn child. Thought maybe someday you'd see Just how you make my heart run wild. Holding on to every touch, Every smell Why, do I continue to love you so much? Locked in this mental prison cell *That's all I have so far*  | 
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      Great job!  Really well written and touching. :-)
     
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     I give away, My heart and soul. Night and day To be happy, my goal. Put it all on the line And, tell you I love you. Hold on to the hope, it'll only take time But, in reality theres nothin' I can do. Even told you to move and marry me. Offered to help raise a possible unborn child. Thought maybe someday you'd see Just how you make my heart run wild. Holding on to every touch, Every smell Why, do I continue to love you so much? Locked in this mental prison cell *That's all I have so far* As like the title of this poem,, we are all works in progress and sometimes the why's just rumble in rampppppittttt over drive,,   
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      Very true... But, "work in progress".. Well that's not a bad idea for a title lol but I just posted what I had so far lol hense "work in progress"
 
  I give away, My heart and soul. Night and day To be happy, my goal. Put it all on the line And, tell you I love you. Hold on to the hope, it'll only take time But, in reality theres nothin' I can do. Even told you to move and marry me. Offered to help raise a possible unborn child. Thought maybe someday you'd see Just how you make my heart run wild. Holding on to every touch, Every smell Why, do I continue to love you so much? Locked in this mental prison cell *That's all I have so far* As like the title of this poem,, we are all works in progress and sometimes the why's just rumble in rampppppittttt over drive,,   
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