Topic: A work in progress..
Army_Strong's photo
Fri 12/19/08 11:37 AM
I give away,
My heart and soul.
Night and day
To be happy, my goal.
Put it all on the line
And, tell you I love you.
Hold on to the hope, it'll only take time
But, in reality theres nothin' I can do.
Even told you to move and marry me.
Offered to help raise a possible unborn child.
Thought maybe someday you'd see
Just how you make my heart run wild.
Holding on to every touch,
Every smell
Why, do I continue to love you so much?
Locked in this mental prison cell


*That's all I have so far*

no photo
Fri 12/19/08 11:45 AM
Great job! Really well written and touching. :-)

LAMom's photo
Sat 12/20/08 08:47 AM

I give away,
My heart and soul.
Night and day
To be happy, my goal.
Put it all on the line
And, tell you I love you.
Hold on to the hope, it'll only take time
But, in reality theres nothin' I can do.
Even told you to move and marry me.
Offered to help raise a possible unborn child.
Thought maybe someday you'd see
Just how you make my heart run wild.
Holding on to every touch,
Every smell
Why, do I continue to love you so much?
Locked in this mental prison cell


*That's all I have so far*


As like the title of this poem,, we are all works in progress and sometimes the why's just rumble in
rampppppittttt over drive,,

flowerforyou

Army_Strong's photo
Sat 12/20/08 11:55 AM
Very true... But, "work in progress".. Well that's not a bad idea for a title lol but I just posted what I had so far lol hense "work in progress"



I give away,
My heart and soul.
Night and day
To be happy, my goal.
Put it all on the line
And, tell you I love you.
Hold on to the hope, it'll only take time
But, in reality theres nothin' I can do.
Even told you to move and marry me.
Offered to help raise a possible unborn child.
Thought maybe someday you'd see
Just how you make my heart run wild.
Holding on to every touch,
Every smell
Why, do I continue to love you so much?
Locked in this mental prison cell


*That's all I have so far*


As like the title of this poem,, we are all works in progress and sometimes the why's just rumble in
rampppppittttt over drive,,

flowerforyou