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Topic: ode to a lovely lady...
daniel48706's photo
Mon 04/09/07 07:25 PM
Sitting here, waiting for you,
looking at pictures you have on post,
my heart beats, so slow.

As I think about what may come,
I look, at your pics,
and my heartbeat begins to gain speed.

Sitting here waiting, to post,
I ask myself one or two things,
and lo', there you are.

As I sit looking in your eyes,
I see nothing, but Soul,
And realize you're my souls better half.

LAMom's photo
Mon 04/09/07 07:27 PM
Daniel,,, Really niceflowerforyou

shenadra's photo
Mon 04/09/07 07:28 PM
Awww...That was sweet...Who knew you were a poet????:wink: drinker

daniel48706's photo
Mon 04/09/07 07:29 PM
lastpiece of poetry I worte was when I left Bosnia and it was for a ldy
then too
what can I say? I am a sap for romance

shenadra's photo
Mon 04/09/07 07:34 PM
Well, Sap away...I like poetry....:smile:

daniel48706's photo
Mon 04/09/07 07:45 PM
here is the final copy...
Sorry folks, but I could not sit back and let it sit incomplete.


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Sitting here, waiting for you,
looking at pictures you have on post,
my heart beats, so slow.

As I think about what may come,
I look, at your pics,
and my heartbeat begins to gain speed.

Sitting here waiting, to post,
I ask myself one or two things,
and lo', there you are.

As I sit, looking in your eyes,
I see nothing, but Soul,
And realize you bring lifes' true gift.

Many long, years i've waited,
in what then was thought just right,
too many lives, walked through.

Now comes, the halfway point,
in darkness I do sit and weep,
your person I, have found.

Sitting here, waiting for you,
looking at pictures you have on post,
my heart lives, in joy.

Jess642's photo
Mon 04/09/07 07:47 PM
Beautiful...breathtaking...I feel your words....thankyouflowerforyou

shenadra's photo
Mon 04/09/07 07:48 PM
Awwww...That was nice...*sniff*

daniel48706's photo
Mon 04/09/07 08:00 PM
And for those that do not know, this Haiku is dedicated to a truly
lovely young lady on JSH, by the name of Autumnlee21.

newguy's photo
Mon 04/09/07 10:05 PM
Damn Dude....I'm amazed at you. I wish I could write like that.

daniel48706's photo
Mon 04/09/07 10:21 PM
wish I could write like that more often, lol. Last time was when I was
inBosnia over ten years ago...

karmafury's photo
Mon 04/09/07 10:26 PM
A beautiful piece.

daniel48706's photo
Mon 04/09/07 10:29 PM
ty karma

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 04/09/07 11:11 PM
Oh Daniel,

That is lovely ... thank you for sharing with us. I feel the resonance
of your words. flowerforyou

wanderingsoul's photo
Mon 04/09/07 11:22 PM
That is a work of art.

daniel48706's photo
Tue 04/10/07 05:48 AM
thank you ladies for the kind words

crazysillygirl's photo
Tue 04/10/07 05:57 AM
awwww...i love it ....that still doesnt tell me who she is daniel!!!!!

prussia's photo
Tue 04/10/07 06:00 AM
Oh those curious women lol

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 04/10/07 10:07 AM
Awww its a beautiful poem indeed Daniel and very heartfelt.bigsmile

daniel48706's photo
Fri 04/13/07 07:56 PM
now she has gone,
a month it will be,
she is moving for work,
I will move for love.

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