Topic: ode to a lovely lady... | |
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Sitting here, waiting for you,
looking at pictures you have on post, my heart beats, so slow. As I think about what may come, I look, at your pics, and my heartbeat begins to gain speed. Sitting here waiting, to post, I ask myself one or two things, and lo', there you are. As I sit looking in your eyes, I see nothing, but Soul, And realize you're my souls better half. |
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Daniel,,, Really nice
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Awww...That was sweet...Who knew you were a poet????
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lastpiece of poetry I worte was when I left Bosnia and it was for a ldy
then too what can I say? I am a sap for romance |
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Well, Sap away...I like poetry....
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here is the final copy...
Sorry folks, but I could not sit back and let it sit incomplete. ________________________________________________________________ Sitting here, waiting for you, looking at pictures you have on post, my heart beats, so slow. As I think about what may come, I look, at your pics, and my heartbeat begins to gain speed. Sitting here waiting, to post, I ask myself one or two things, and lo', there you are. As I sit, looking in your eyes, I see nothing, but Soul, And realize you bring lifes' true gift. Many long, years i've waited, in what then was thought just right, too many lives, walked through. Now comes, the halfway point, in darkness I do sit and weep, your person I, have found. Sitting here, waiting for you, looking at pictures you have on post, my heart lives, in joy. |
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Beautiful...breathtaking...I feel your words....thankyou
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Awwww...That was nice...*sniff*
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And for those that do not know, this Haiku is dedicated to a truly
lovely young lady on JSH, by the name of Autumnlee21. |
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Damn Dude....I'm amazed at you. I wish I could write like that.
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wish I could write like that more often, lol. Last time was when I was
inBosnia over ten years ago... |
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A beautiful piece.
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ty karma
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Oh Daniel,
That is lovely ... thank you for sharing with us. I feel the resonance of your words. |
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That is a work of art.
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thank you ladies for the kind words
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awwww...i love it ....that still doesnt tell me who she is daniel!!!!!
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Oh those curious women lol
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Awww its a beautiful poem indeed Daniel and very heartfelt.
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now she has gone,
a month it will be, she is moving for work, I will move for love. |
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