Topic: Dark Night | |
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coming for me
to settle down the anger nebulous dark words home casts astray a quilted city desperate, chasing itself, the drowning laid out in the soft concrete and fragile bone caves, electric and darkness collided together emerging anew, fragrant, coursing through every vein endless, lapsing, madmen abandoned and lost women and high-heeled babies splintering, and businessmen on a secret drinking trip hazy nighttime traveling this space contained ourselves, raw, breakable, blood pulse overheating and beating and I stumble through this all sliced by a creeping night |
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hands reaching out
arms wide fingers splayed blindly groping the way only the newly blind search |
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hands clapping- and the visual high heeled babies, what can I say
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standing ovation one of the best i've read in a long while. I hope you don't underestimate your writing skills Your a very talented writer
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Nicely done
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Thank you
Harold pkd Bill Mystique |
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Well now Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn I agree with every read,, I am pulled in wanting more,,
Most awesome write |
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Beautiful!
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