Topic: Romance in the Mist | |
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I’ve been chasing romance that’s been over at length
I should give it up, but I don’t have the strength The memories haunt me, they pervade my dreams But nothing is ever what at first it seems I cling to a notion of true love for me And my mind has confirmed that it’s not meant to be But my heart won’t accept that it does not exist It hides from the truth while it’s deep in the mist It won’t dare to look at the facts plain as day If it does, it will die and just wither away So it clings to the notion that love is still real It refuses to break, so it won’t have to heal I don’t know how long I can protect my heart When the truth finally dawns, it will just break apart And so I continue to think I am wanted If I really believe it, my dreams won’t be haunted But the truth trickles in, just like acid it burns The mind understands, but the heart never learns |
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that is so beautiful it made me tear up.Love is a gift that when found should be cherished
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Bravo!!! You sure have the feelings nailed!!
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That was very beautiful
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You are both very kind.
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you have a very lovely way with words keep it up
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you have a very lovely way with words keep it up you are all very kind. |
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you have a very lovely way with words keep it up you are all very kind. Perhaps you are being gracious or perhaps you don't see it.... YOU REALLY DO HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS!!! These poems have been just lovely. I'm jealous, in a good way!! |
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It refuses to break, so it won’t have to heal Exceptional gift you have. I loved your poem. I understand all too well. Wonderful in every way. |
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you have a very lovely way with words keep it up you are all very kind. Perhaps you are being gracious or perhaps you don't see it.... YOU REALLY DO HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS!!! These poems have been just lovely. I'm jealous, in a good way!! |
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It refuses to break, so it won’t have to heal Exceptional gift you have. I loved your poem. I understand all too well. Wonderful in every way. |
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nice
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nice thanks, Mirror. |
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So much revealed in the written word that often cannot be spoken. Beautiful write!
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Wonderful.....
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your words where heart felt its truly something how even though we tell are selves that there's know hope are heart's are still willing to try
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Very well done ~ heartfelt and human
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