Topic: Help with the last three lines.
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Sun 08/10/08 02:55 PM
There is more to life than this.
I don't owe you an explanation.
I long for a tender kiss.
I need no more alienation.
I have had enough of this.
Been used and abused by a master.
Sure you can promise me bliss.
But all I can see is disaster.
You read of me on the dating site.
And you thought that you could use me.
But I don't think I'll find love tonight.
I think I'll wait till next Tuesday.

Got any ideas?

littleike's photo
Sun 08/10/08 03:05 PM
god has sugested to me that day would be perfect for thee

BobbyJ's photo
Sun 08/10/08 03:12 PM
That day comes, I have new sight.
I learn to live and love again.
You were true and so forthright!


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Sun 08/10/08 03:14 PM

There is more to life than this.
I don't owe you an explanation.
I long for a tender kiss.
I need no more alienation.
I have had enough of this.
Been used and abused by a master.
Sure you can promise me bliss.
But all I can see is disaster.
You read of me on the dating site.
And you thought that you could use me.
But I don't think I'll find love tonight.
I think I'll wait till next Tuesday.

Got any ideas?

There is more to life than this.
I don't owe you an explanation.
I long for a tender kiss.
I need no more alienation.
I have had enough of this.
Been used and abused by a master.
Sure you can promise me bliss.
But all I can see is disaster.
You read of me on the dating site.
You falsely tell me, your my guiding light.
Then I find your "nowhere" in site.
Your bliss is like piss,
YOUR as yellow as your, "shallow".
YOUR probably not even a "fellow".drinker :wink:

laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh Just a giggle to add to your wiggle,wink,lol

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Sun 08/10/08 03:26 PM

You read of me on the dating site.
And you thought that you could use me.
But I don't think I'll find love tonight.
I think I'll wait till next Tuesday.

How about:
You read of me on the dating site.
You thought I'm what you're after.
But I don't think I'll find love tonight.
I'll just settle for laughter.

Still sucks, but I like it more.
Thank you, all, for contributions.flowerforyou