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Hope for the moment and hope for the day
Nothing left to give you Nothing left to say Hands raised to heaven Where is my God Eyes and heart are blood shot Casting down my rod Knees are bent and dirty Been prayin all along Throat is dry and raspy From singin this same song Backs in pain from carryin Hard and heavy loads Wishin you would help me Can't do it all alone Phone is always silent I alone here make the calls Can hear the rain a fallin' Cavin' in four walls All my footsteps solo Mornin' noon and night If i didn't know better I'd think I've died of fright Love and loss are all I know No happiness easy found When I do find solace She always turns around Poised on one foot ready To make her exit quick Leaving me feeling Sad and cold and sick Wish that it were different This the truth of all Wish that I could change it Erect me four new walls Alas solo I cannot do this My hopes are far between Little warmth have I felt Few beauties have I seen What I have seen burnt my eyes Like the coming on of dawn Filtered with no glasses Blindness they have spawned Reaching out for more I am feeling you at last Soon to be no present Soon to be no past Embracing what I hope to be Images of peace Wrapped within a sweet soft love Always leaving ME>>>> WILLIAM H. CALDWELL III |
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That is really Awesome.
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Thanks K.... WILL
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man that made me cry...you know i love your stuff Will
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Serious Will this is one of your best very heartfelt
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Will, You have a magical way with words...
Beautiful, painful, hopeful... |
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Will, my brother, best I have ever read of yours to date...it slammed me
hit hard...powerful and awesome!! |
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((((Will)))) Well said, sad with a ray of hope. My favorite one of
yours too. |
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Thank alot this one came easy.. It is exactly how I feel these
days..WILL Ps Goodnightall |
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Thank you, this is good writing.
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Thanks again..Phone is still silent....WILL
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will, nice to see you writing !!!
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beautiful
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Thanks again all.. WILL
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Awesome Will,,
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Thanks everyone once again .. I truly appreciate the comments.. this is
a song now as well.. Anyone wishing to hear it just ask and i will play it for you live..WILL |
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Wanted everyone to check this out again.. I am having writers
block..ALWAYS..WILL |
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(((Will)))
Listen to your Soul and the words will flow,, Your an Incredible Writer,,, |
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Wow!! Very heartfelt will....Nice work.... |
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Thank you
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