Topic: The Heartbeats of the Beast | |
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No no no, not again
this cant be happening Lying so peacefully slight tension of the spine An overwhelming sense of blood drowns the Beast The shadows on the wall laugh, ever so loudly Scream, scream it all out loud, i wont end soon enough =] This is where masochism comes in handy the laughing gets so loud The beast's voice is muted, he is left looking as if he is laughing laugh it all away friends. Theres a shadow on the wall, moving slowly towards me and all i can do is laugh? So thats what I will do, laugh Theres blood everywhere, but no sight of it! My heart Beat slows, a 3/4 Time if you will =] Galiant light has shone bright through my eyes though they try to es- cape theres no way Ill make break out of this skin this unholy hell this dead flesh its so Galiant so great and my thoughts rush I make no sense make sense of this I can barely do it myself just keep talking all i seem to do just keep talking keep laughing keep dreaming ill wake up from this But youll move on, ive still got recovery time please help me the bleeding wont stop But theres no blood theres no blood i cant find it, all I can do is taste it! not again, the sense of a xenophobia whats next I wonder the heart beat of a series of blasts what metal heads know as a blast beat prepare for it damn it all..... The spine locks, giving the Beast the shape of a crescent such a peaceful moon =] And in the even that I should fall let it be known it was no ones fault that i couldnt make it out of this that when i wake up i may be awake but it doesnt matter because they will laugh, they will never know what its like to lose it all to see those beautiful gates the gates the gates the gates i wish to see them again just please let me see them again for the love of all thats sacred the souls who ponder this writing will never see this will never see whats going on will never know whats in my head and they wont care they wont care but arise Beast be yourself again =] wake up, and eat something good, or bad, you cant tell the difference, have fun kid Youll make it through the night keep the 3/4 Such a Galiant touch Epic no? arise Knight keep it Holy Knight rememember your script Avoid the cake, adore the cake |
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So tell me, I need some feedback, what do you think?
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Edited by
s1owhand
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Sun 08/03/08 02:10 AM
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i enjoyed reading.
welcome to the poetry forum of jsh! |
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the angst of it all-I liked and welcome!!
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Well written, hmmm ponder fodder galore and hollow laughter from shadows.
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just pay attention to the way i use my words, sort of a triumphant sarcasm
its a way to acknowledge defeat almost but take it in stride as to not let it get to you |
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Unintentional chords will be struck in ur readers.
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how do you mean?
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welcome you'll bring a new flavor around here. i enjoyed it
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Nice piece of work... I liked it.
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Again drawn in by your soul,,,
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