Topic: The Heartbeats of the Beast
xxAzriahtheBeastxx's photo
Sat 08/02/08 11:39 PM
No no no, not again
this cant be happening

Lying so peacefully
slight tension of the spine

An overwhelming sense of blood
drowns the Beast

The shadows on the wall laugh,
ever so loudly

Scream, scream it all out loud,
i wont end soon enough
=] This is where masochism comes in handy

the laughing gets so loud
The beast's voice is muted, he is left looking as if he is laughing

laugh it all away friends.

Theres a shadow on the wall,
moving slowly towards me

and all i can do is laugh?
So thats what I will do, laugh

Theres blood everywhere, but no sight of it!

My heart Beat slows, a 3/4 Time if you will =]

Galiant
light has shone
bright through my
eyes though they
try to es-
cape theres no
way Ill make
break out of
this skin this
unholy
hell this dead
flesh its so
Galiant
so great and
my thoughts rush

I make no sense

make sense of this
I can barely do it myself

just keep talking
all i seem to do

just keep talking

keep laughing

keep dreaming

ill wake up from this

But youll move on,

ive still got recovery time

please help me the bleeding wont stop
But theres no blood
theres no blood

i cant find it, all I can do is taste it!

not again,


the sense of a xenophobia

whats next I wonder

the heart beat of a series of blasts
what metal heads know as a blast beat

prepare for it

damn it all.....

The spine locks, giving the Beast the shape of a crescent

such a peaceful moon =]



And in the even that I should fall let it be known it was no ones fault that i couldnt make it out of this that when i wake up i may be awake but it doesnt matter because they will laugh, they will never know what its like to lose it all to see those beautiful gates the gates the gates the gates i wish to see them again just please let me see them again for the love of all thats sacred the souls who ponder this writing will never see this will never see whats going on will never know whats in my head and they wont care they wont care


but

arise Beast

be yourself again

=]

wake up, and eat something good, or bad, you cant tell the difference, have fun kid

Youll make it through the night

keep the 3/4

Such a Galiant touch

Epic no?

arise Knight

keep it Holy Knight


rememember your script

Avoid the cake, adore the cake

xxAzriahtheBeastxx's photo
Sun 08/03/08 12:03 AM
So tell me, I need some feedback, what do you think?

s1owhand's photo
Sun 08/03/08 02:10 AM
Edited by s1owhand on Sun 08/03/08 02:10 AM
i enjoyed reading. drinker

welcome to the poetry forum of jsh!

no photo
Sun 08/03/08 03:24 PM
the angst of it all-I liked and welcome!!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 08/03/08 05:34 PM
Well written, hmmm ponder fodder galore and hollow laughter from shadows.

xxAzriahtheBeastxx's photo
Sun 08/03/08 07:04 PM
just pay attention to the way i use my words, sort of a triumphant sarcasm

its a way to acknowledge defeat almost but take it in stride as to not let it get to you

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 08/03/08 07:18 PM
Unintentional chords will be struck in ur readers.

xxAzriahtheBeastxx's photo
Sun 08/03/08 07:42 PM
how do you mean?

no photo
Sun 08/03/08 07:50 PM
smokin welcome you'll bring a new flavor around here. i enjoyed it drinker

Thrace's photo
Mon 08/04/08 09:52 AM
Nice piece of work... I liked it.

LAMom's photo
Wed 08/06/08 10:48 PM
Again drawn in by your soul,,, flowerforyou