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Isn't it strange that you had nothing positive to contribute on my comment, but suggest that my purely objective criticism is somehow faulty because it's "negative." Practice what you preach, especially during PMS . . . : )LOL
Henry will undoubtedly grow as a writer and poet and person because he can be objective and doesn't take things personally. We could all learn from that approach to life. BTW haiku is 17 syllables comparing haiku to far longer pieces is a propaganda tool called "setting up the straw man," and unworthy of intelligent conversation. Good luck, I'll look for your more intelligent commentary in half a month . . . |
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Edited by
MsWizard
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Isn't it strange that you had nothing positive to contribute on my comment, but suggest that my purely objective criticism is somehow faulty because it's "negative." Practice what you preach, especially during PMS . . . : )LOL Henry will undoubtedly grow as a writer and poet and person because he can be objective and doesn't take things personally. We could all learn from that approach to life. BTW haiku is 17 syllables comparing haiku to far longer pieces is a propaganda tool called "setting up the straw man," and unworthy of intelligent conversation. Good luck, I'll look for your more intelligent commentary in half a month . . . Thank you. Your comment has been noted and filed in the appropriate place (sounds of flushing in the background.) |
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Isn't it strange that you had nothing positive to contribute on my comment, but suggest that my purely objective criticism is somehow faulty because it's "negative." Practice what you preach, especially during PMS . . . : )LOL Henry will undoubtedly grow as a writer and poet and person because he can be objective and doesn't take things personally. We could all learn from that approach to life. BTW haiku is 17 syllables comparing haiku to far longer pieces is a propaganda tool called "setting up the straw man," and unworthy of intelligent conversation. Good luck, I'll look for your more intelligent commentary in half a month . . . flush again, thats a lot of bullshiit! |
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Isn't it strange that you had nothing positive to contribute on my comment, but suggest that my purely objective criticism is somehow faulty because it's "negative." Practice what you preach, especially during PMS . . . : )LOL Henry will undoubtedly grow as a writer and poet and person because he can be objective and doesn't take things personally. We could all learn from that approach to life. BTW haiku is 17 syllables comparing haiku to far longer pieces is a propaganda tool called "setting up the straw man," and unworthy of intelligent conversation. Good luck, I'll look for your more intelligent commentary in half a month . . . flush again, thats a lot of bullshiit! <<---flushing |
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Edited by
MsWizard
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Sun 08/03/08 03:07 PM
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Isn't it strange that you had nothing positive to contribute on my comment, but suggest that my purely objective criticism is somehow faulty because it's "negative." Practice what you preach, especially during PMS . . . : )LOL Henry will undoubtedly grow as a writer and poet and person because he can be objective and doesn't take things personally. We could all learn from that approach to life. BTW haiku is 17 syllables comparing haiku to far longer pieces is a propaganda tool called "setting up the straw man," and unworthy of intelligent conversation. Good luck, I'll look for your more intelligent commentary in half a month . . . All talk no substance (5 syllables) Empty sacks hold no water (7 syllables) Man to be distained (5 syllables) |
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Isn't it strange that you had nothing positive to contribute on my comment, but suggest that my objective criticism is somehow faulty because it's "negative." Practice what you preach, especially during PMS . . . LOL IF YA AIN'T GOT ANYTHING NICE TO SAY "DON"T SAY ANYTHING"! And here in this place WE are not (ANY-OF-US) GREAT POETS, so until YOU have THAT TITLE and accomplishments under your name, YOU in-my-mind, have NOT the skill nor training to SAY what IS or IS NOT good poetry!  BUT, again THIS is just MY OPINION as to how WE should be or view others on here.  
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Isn't it strange that you had nothing positive to contribute on my comment, but suggest that my objective criticism is somehow faulty because it's "negative." Practice what you preach, especially during PMS . . . LOL IF YA AIN'T GOT ANYTHING NICE TO SAY "DON"T SAY ANYTHING"! And here in this place WE are not (ANY-OF-US) GREAT POETS, so until YOU have THAT TITLE and accomplishments under your name, YOU in-my-mind, have NOT the skill nor training to SAY what IS or IS NOT good poetry! BUT, again THIS is just MY OPINION as to how WE should be or view others on here.
<<----scampering over and jumping on T~  How are you this fine day sunshine?
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Isn't it strange that you had nothing positive to contribute on my comment, but suggest that my objective criticism is somehow faulty because it's "negative." Practice what you preach, especially during PMS . . . LOL IF YA AIN'T GOT ANYTHING NICE TO SAY "DON"T SAY ANYTHING"! And here in this place WE are not (ANY-OF-US) GREAT POETS, so until YOU have THAT TITLE and accomplishments under your name, YOU in-my-mind, have NOT the skill nor training to SAY what IS or IS NOT good poetry! BUT, again THIS is just MY OPINION as to how WE should be or view others on here.
See to me, CRITICISM to me is a word someone found that allows them to speak their mind about another without it looking crude. And alot of critics, seem to HIDE behind that WORD. Yet still FEEL they can say ANYTHING to another as long as they head it with its only criticism.. Kind-of-like-this. I don't want to offend you but YOUR VERY UGLY! 
SO,,what you up to young beautiful lady of phrase,wink...lol <<----scampering over and jumping on T~ How are you this fine day sunshine?
Living still, so THAT a GOOD THING,lol
Im here for a short and still looking after all of these great people on here as to SEEING life through my mind,lol,lol |
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Isn't it strange that you had nothing positive to contribute on my comment, but suggest that my objective criticism is somehow faulty because it's "negative." Practice what you preach, especially during PMS . . . LOL IF YA AIN'T GOT ANYTHING NICE TO SAY "DON"T SAY ANYTHING"! And here in this place WE are not (ANY-OF-US) GREAT POETS, so until YOU have THAT TITLE and accomplishments under your name, YOU in-my-mind, have NOT the skill nor training to SAY what IS or IS NOT good poetry! BUT, again THIS is just MY OPINION as to how WE should be or view others on here.
See to me, CRITICISM to me is a word someone found that allows them to speak their mind about another without it looking crude. And alot of critics, seem to HIDE behind that WORD. Yet still FEEL they can say ANYTHING to another as long as they head it with its only criticism.. Kind-of-like-this. I don't want to offend you but YOUR VERY UGLY!
SO,,what you up to young beautiful lady of phrase,wink...lol <<----scampering over and jumping on T~ How are you this fine day sunshine?
Living still, so THAT a GOOD THING,lol
Im here for a short and still looking after all of these great people on here as to SEEING life through my mind,lol,lol Well, I think if a lot of us could see life through your eyes and mind we'd all be better off my friend...
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Well, I think if a lot of us could see life through your eyes and mind we'd all be better off my friend...
I bet YOU say THAT to ALL THE MEN protecting your honor...lol.lol Heres to GOOD FRIENDS!!
And heres a gripping two arm catch with a hug, before I set ya back down,wink,,lol |
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"And heres a gripping two arm catch with a hug, before I set ya back down,wink,,lol"
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! |
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Edited by
s1owhand
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Sun 08/03/08 04:53 PM
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oh my goodness.
leans forward to catch MsWiz on the wheeled cart and whisk her off
turned out to be more amusing than the usual poem... (Addams Family Transcript) But, Mother, you can't-- Can it, Gordon. Stop dragging your feet. You disgust me! You're nothing but a useless, sniveling baby, a stone around my neck. What was I thinking? I should have left you where I found you. No tricks, Gomez. That's the wrong book. Allow me. Good show, old man. Put that book down, Gordon. You don't know what it can do. It's not just literature. Oh, really? (Gordon -Uncle Fester- slowly opens the book titled "Hurricane Irene"
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oh my goodness.
leans forward to catch MsWiz on the wheeled cart and whisk her off
turned out to be more amusing than the usual poem... (Addams Family Transcript) But, Mother, you can't-- Can it, Gordon. Stop dragging your feet. You disgust me! You're nothing but a useless, sniveling baby, a stone around my neck. What was I thinking? I should have left you where I found you. No tricks, Gomez. That's the wrong book. Allow me. Good show, old man. Put that book down, Gordon. You don't know what it can do. It's not just literature. Oh, really? (Gordon -Uncle Fester- slowly opens the book titled "Hurricane Irene"
Come 'ere you!
<<<-----reaches out and grabs H ((((HENRY))))
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creativity is so i don't know
untechnical
now what should i say on desire |
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nice s1ow
you have now inspired me on the same subject |
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GREAT WRITE S1OW!!!
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the night noises quiet lights dimmed dishwasher relaxing exhaling steam spent refrigerator hum i think calmly mixing louche in absinthe cloudy droplets of anticipation illicit pleasurable oh yes luxurious indulgence soft time nighttime all alone amber caramel thoughts of you my fingers comb plush ripples searching for you there you are perfect hands find me and soft full lips wet slightly nervous their tremble drives me wild with recognition and submission and more submission i give in when resistance gently yields then yields again and soon over heat the tiniest hint of last desperate resistance says no god no not this not yet too late resistance all lost inside instead heat desire 
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Edited by
Jess642
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Thu 09/04/08 12:48 PM
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the night noises quiet lights dimmed dishwasher relaxing exhaling steam spent refrigerator hum i think calmly mixing louche in absinthe cloudy droplets of anticipation illicit pleasurable oh yes luxurious indulgence soft time nighttime all alone amber caramel thoughts of you my fingers comb plush ripples searching for you there you are perfect hands find me and soft full lips wet slightly nervous their tremble drives me wild with recognition and submission and more submission i give in when resistance gently yields then yields again and soon over heat the tiniest hint of last desperate resistance says no god no not this not yet too late resistance all lost inside instead heat desire Good morning.... someone turn that damn dishwasher off, yeah? Oh! By the way....... ........ perfect.
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Jess
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