Topic: oh god
jimz's photo
Sun 07/27/08 01:23 PM
some of
the sun
shines
from the sun
into the sun
away from

ideal
dreams
lit up
liquid
lights
so many
dimen
sions
the
auras
tastes
like
sun

idle
rays
a holo
graphic
memory
but i
need to
move
need
to

cas
tle
of
the
uni
ver
ses
cas
tles
of
the
uni
ver
sal
souls
longing
of beauty
longing
for the
river
of scars
to dry
up
out
of the
desert
sea

old
heart
oh ancient
heart
always
new
always
a moment
in your
seaful
eyes

oh god

s1owhand's photo
Sun 07/27/08 03:04 PM
Edited by s1owhand on Sun 07/27/08 03:05 PM

"i like that"


the
water
run
ning
up
cracks
in
the wall
flo
wing
see
ping
quenching

the old
heart
the tired
heart
the ancient
heart
our
uni
vers
al
heart

bigsmile

jimz's photo
Sun 07/27/08 03:31 PM


"i like that"


the
water
run
ning
up
cracks
in
the wall
flo
wing
see
ping
quenching

the old
heart
the tired
heart
the ancient
heart
our
uni
vers
al
heart

bigsmile


cool

writteninstone's photo
Sun 07/27/08 04:25 PM
Close to EE cummings.. LOL - almost ten years ago I read him so much. He was particular, yet enchanting.

thanks for the poetry.

thanks

TAB

LAMom's photo
Mon 07/28/08 12:43 AM
((( Jimmy ))))

flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 07/28/08 08:19 AM
Oh, Jimmy- hugs to you:smile: