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Topic: Past and Future
myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Wed 07/23/08 07:40 PM
The things I am to regret in this curving life have not yet taken their chance to make me cry. The mistakes I made grew around me in a hard shell, absorbing all the tears before they fell. I am tough. Future plans are bright, sparkling, big, as far as I can see. The past only pushed me so far and now I’m pushing myself.

johncarl Joined Mon 11/26/07 Posts: 5074	Wed 07/23/08 07:50 PM


jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Wed 07/23/08 07:55 PM
great stuff

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Wed 07/23/08 08:26 PM


myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Wed 07/23/08 09:43 PM
Thank you so much (((John, jimz, s1ow)))

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 07/23/08 09:50 PM
The things I am to regret in this curving life have not yet taken their chance to make me cry. The mistakes I made grew around me in a hard shell, absorbing all the tears before they fell. I am tough. Future plans are bright, sparkling, big, as far as I can see. The past only pushed me so far and now I’m pushing myself. As you are pushin forward I see a bit of Pizazzzzz to the step Nice,, I Really like this one

DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Wed 07/23/08 09:57 PM
excellent

writteninstone Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 95	Wed 07/23/08 10:02 PM
keep going- I guess growth is the best word to describe your poetry TAB

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