take it in
woven like skin
(the stars woven to stars)
darkness an empty space)
woven in sworn in lies(alleys
steps from sea)
swimming
like
drowning

a piece
of
resolved
mirrors
(i have
to look
sometimes
like you
want me to)

i own
this timeless
place
of solitude

no to
bleeeding from
from the top
of the bottom
(turn over
the jars
of stars
and it all
ends)

faceless
maidens(all the
face petals
turning into
scented
windows
of bright
beauty

i now
bow
by i
now
bow
out of
digging
my
head(stones
drones
headless

take
my
fogged
box
con
scious

unseal
my
wax

Wonderful

Good stuff Jimz.

"take it in
woven like skin"
You had me at the beginning Jimmy. Great job

Most of your lines are worded in a confusing way, but I like your rhythm and caesuras, they really create a rolling motion like the turning of your jars.