Topic: outclassed
DirkGently's photo
Sun 07/20/08 01:03 PM
please allow me the time to think
let me get my mind wrapped 'round what was said
let it ricocet throughout my head
so i can carefully tread around the landmines you have laid

the words you spit at me are sharp
i duck and weave and bob but still
your words are piercing me at will
and they won't stop until you take the time to breathe

i'm feeling desperately outclassed
i brought a knife, you have a gun
and a lazer, not on "stun"
and i'm wondering how long i will last

you come at me from ten sides ant once
the torrent raining down on me
it rains so thick that i can't see
it looks like she will win again

d4tc's photo
Sun 07/20/08 01:31 PM
Great Write! drinker

myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 07/20/08 01:51 PM
Very nice! flowers

writteninstone's photo
Sun 07/20/08 06:03 PM
silence it your best defense frustrated

good luck

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