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Pondering of the Soul
Life is but a whisper An open grave in ground We hover one foot over And hope never to fall down. We rarely see it comming Like a sudden spark at night All at once there's clarity Then we stumble in our might. The moments that we live Are just pictures in a frame, Looking back we realize What for we are blamed. We climb the steepest mountains And brave the frozen wastes Yet we find we're nothing When it comes to being great. excerpt from diaries of the necromancer by Fadedspirit. |
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Pondering of the Soul Life is but a whisper An open grave in ground We hover one foot over And hope never to fall down. We rarely see it comming Like a sudden spark at night All at once there's clarity Then we stumble in our might. The moments that we live Are just pictures in a frame, Looking back we realize What for we are blamed. We climb the steepest mountains And brave the frozen wastes Yet we find we're nothing When it comes to being great. excerpt from diaries of the necromancer by Fadedspirit.  Great write!
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my soul felt a little bitter, and lonely this go around. Hopefully I can pull myself up and work towards some akward meaning for where it was suppose to work for the Good...
I like your write.. TaB |
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Edited by
writteninstone
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Sat 07/19/08 09:35 PM
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Well done my old friend! Good 2 see you back!
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Necromancers dancing with small deaths - have missed ur thoughts.....
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{{{{FADE}}}}
Oh sorry, did'nt mean to knock you over! 
Just so good to see you again friend! Welcome home! 
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((((( Faded ))))))
Soooooooooooooooooooooo good to see you,, Awesome Write 
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Wow, thank you all for your replies. Just to update y'all a bit, I'm still working weird hours and hoping they'll end soon so I can get back to writing more and being around my friends here.
writteninstone though I haven't met ya yet, thank you much and welcome to our little corner of the poetry world. Keep your head up and your heart fresh. mteagle, Thanks my friend. It's good to see you too. DKW, awww, thanks...I've missed being around too. ((((((MsTeddyBear!)))))) Ya almost stepped on me....lol...it's ok darlin, it's good to see you too....hee hee Awww thanks ((((LAMom)))) good to see you too hun.
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good as always x
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