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Topic: I walked the tracks...
LoveBone Joined Mon 07/14/08 Posts: 333	Wed 07/16/08 12:09 PM
I walked the tracks this morning. Remnants of animals, Too slow of mind or body, A dog, An armadillo, And something else, Here's a femur. There's a backbone with ribs. A quick look both ways, Nothing's coming. I walked the tracks this morning.

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Wed 07/16/08 12:13 PM
You certainly are a dark soul!

LoveBone Joined Mon 07/14/08 Posts: 333	Wed 07/16/08 12:15 PM
You certainly are a dark soul! I feel dark...the love of my life is gone forever...but thank you

Gypsy41 Joined Tue 05/15/07 Posts: 123359	Wed 07/16/08 12:15 PM
did you see any chip bags there??? I always see empty chip bags.....

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Wed 07/16/08 12:16 PM
i didn't know armadillos ate chips..lol

No1sLove Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 10342	Wed 07/16/08 12:16 PM
I got a chill down my spine with that one! Vivid! Well written hon!

Gypsy41 Joined Tue 05/15/07 Posts: 123359	Wed 07/16/08 12:18 PM
now I cant stop thinking about chips!!!

LoveBone Joined Mon 07/14/08 Posts: 333	Wed 07/16/08 12:19 PM
theres nothing more peaceful than walking along the train tracks trying to walk your loneliness away...or run from it

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 07/16/08 12:46 PM
theres nothing more peaceful than walking along the train tracks trying to walk your loneliness away...or run from it Very deeply felt,,,, Enjoy your walk take in all around.. The pain is deep,, yet don't run,, just walk,,,,,

LoveBone Joined Mon 07/14/08 Posts: 333	Wed 07/16/08 01:26 PM
thank you all for your kindness

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 07/16/08 02:51 PM


pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 07/16/08 04:03 PM
good write

DirkGently Joined Sun 06/22/08 Posts: 1252	Wed 07/16/08 04:49 PM
incredibly cool, very interesting subject matter

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