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Topic: Void
Army_Strong Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 1254	Mon 07/07/08 06:43 PM
Void It’s been two years since you left Came in pretty buzzed From a night of drinking Looked in your room Thought something was wrong Shrugged it off Because that’s what I always thought Should’ve woke you up Just so I could’ve said I love you Just one more time The tears in my eyes Every time I think of it Saying it in an empty room Doesn’t fill the void You’ve been in most of my dreams For at least six months now Never speaking Just there Waking up some mornings I expect to see you in the kitchen Taking your medicine Or making breakfast Then the harshness of reality sinks in When I walk downstairs And your not there. Say what you have to say today Instead of thinking you’ll Get the chance tomorrow DY 7-7-08

rainysky39 Joined Sun 01/20/08 Posts: 4071	Mon 07/07/08 06:45 PM


MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 07/07/08 06:49 PM
Void It’s been two years since you left Came in pretty buzzed From a night of drinking Looked in your room Thought something was wrong Shrugged it off Because that’s what I always thought Should’ve woke you up Just so I could’ve said I love you Just one more time The tears in my eyes Every time I think of it Saying it in an empty room Doesn’t fill the void You’ve been in most of my dreams For at least six months now Never speaking Just there Waking up some mornings I expect to see you in the kitchen Taking your medicine Or making breakfast Then the harshness of reality sinks in When I walk downstairs And your not there. Say what you have to say today Instead of thinking you’ll Get the chance tomorrow DY 7-7-08 Excellent. This is the best I've read from you. This was right on the money.

Army_Strong Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 1254	Mon 07/07/08 06:55 PM
Void It’s been two years since you left Came in pretty buzzed From a night of drinking Looked in your room Thought something was wrong Shrugged it off Because that’s what I always thought Should’ve woke you up Just so I could’ve said I love you Just one more time The tears in my eyes Every time I think of it Saying it in an empty room Doesn’t fill the void You’ve been in most of my dreams For at least six months now Never speaking Just there Waking up some mornings I expect to see you in the kitchen Taking your medicine Or making breakfast Then the harshness of reality sinks in When I walk downstairs And your not there. Say what you have to say today Instead of thinking you’ll Get the chance tomorrow DY 7-7-08 Excellent. This is the best I've read from you. This was right on the money. Thanks

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 07/07/08 07:21 PM
Void It’s been two years since you left Came in pretty buzzed From a night of drinking Looked in your room Thought something was wrong Shrugged it off Because that’s what I always thought Should’ve woke you up Just so I could’ve said I love you Just one more time The tears in my eyes Every time I think of it Saying it in an empty room Doesn’t fill the void You’ve been in most of my dreams For at least six months now Never speaking Just there Waking up some mornings I expect to see you in the kitchen Taking your medicine Or making breakfast Then the harshness of reality sinks in When I walk downstairs And your not there. Say what you have to say today Instead of thinking you’ll Get the chance tomorrow DY 7-7-08 Excellent. This is the best I've read from you. This was right on the money. Thanks No need for thanks. This was truly wonderful Army MUAH!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 07/07/08 07:40 PM
Cool write man!

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