Topic: White Picket Fences
GCLIFE's photo
Mon 07/07/08 07:57 AM
She sits alone to ponder
Sudden chill disrobes her senses
The life she leads is broken now
Shattered by white picket fences

She held out for the dreams
of promise and prosperity
Never did arrive
Lifetime lost amenities

Men of fortune would surround
This diamond in the rough
Tear drops fall this drizzling eve
Twas never quite enough

Catered to perfection
Glass house with no stones
Swept away with riches
With the rug you’ve always owned

Tomorrow is a new day
To frolic with elite
Shed the sorrow salty girl
The bread winners sense defeat

Sit alone and ponder
Those with lesser jewels
They find contentment in their heart
They found it … why can’t you?


FaithfulOne78's photo
Mon 07/07/08 07:59 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

moonlight_ride62's photo
Mon 07/07/08 08:01 AM
nice...I think I almost cried...:cry:

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Mon 07/07/08 08:04 AM
:cry:

LAMom's photo
Mon 07/07/08 09:39 AM
flowers

Beautifully Sad,,,


TiffaIrishGirl's photo
Mon 07/07/08 10:13 AM

flowers

Beautifully Sad,,,


perfect description :cry: flowerforyou

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Mon 07/07/08 10:27 AM
Nice write.flowerforyou flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Mon 07/07/08 11:05 AM
Nice. happy drinker

AngelLight's photo
Mon 07/07/08 11:29 AM
Awesome write....very intense....very true....contentment and happiness are not found in money/riches....they are ultimately found from within.

flowerforyou

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Mon 07/07/08 11:41 AM
Nice write!!drinks

Blurple's photo
Mon 07/07/08 11:45 AM
Very well written... hoping this lovely lady finds what you are wishing for her

ChelleBelle's photo
Wed 07/09/08 09:10 AM
flowerforyou beautiful