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Edited by
AngelLight
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Mon 07/07/08 04:23 AM
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Yes it's true; I
prayed you into my very existence. I consistently thought of you; I saw you, whether I was awake or asleep, until you appeared. You're transparent and sheer, and I feel every subtle movement within your heart. You mirror the stars, yet there isn't enough fire in the universe to match your beauty; your simplicity, your complexity, your sensitivity, your raw electricity. You draw me into your fire and I am purified, as fire so often does. If there ever was a man as lovely as you, this is the first time I ever knew the depths of Love. You encompass so much more than I ever dreamed of; you are Love, incarnate. You are Love's precious garnet. JDS 07/07/08 |
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Very nice...as usual
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"i like that"
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Nice work..and the poetry isn't bad either!
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Very nice...as usual ![]() ![]() Ty (((Puffins))) and (((s1ow))) ![]() ![]() Ty too goodhere. Good morning. It's nice to meet you. I appreciate the compliment. |
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very dedicated tribute
![]() Yes it's true; I prayed you into my very existence. I consistently thought of you; I saw you, whether I was awake or asleep, until you appeared. You're transparent and sheer, and I feel every subtle movement within your heart. You mirror the stars, yet there isn't enough fire in the universe to match your beauty; your simplicity, your complexity, your sensitivity, your raw electricity. You draw me into your fire and I am purified, as fire so often does. If there ever was a man as lovely as you, this is the first time I ever knew the depths of Love. You encompass so much more than I ever dreamed of; you are Love, incarnate. You are Love's precious garnet. JDS 07/07/08 |
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Very beautiful as always, Angel. Hope you had a great weekend.
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~ Garnet, REVISED ~
Yes, it's true; I prayed you into my very existence. I consistently thought of you; Awake or asleep I saw you until you appeared. You are transparent and sheer, and I feel every subtle movement within your heart. You mirror the stars, yet there is not enough fire in the universe to match your beauty; your simplicity, your complexity, your perplexity, your sensitivity, your raw electricity. You draw me into your fire and I am purified, as fire so often does. If there ever was a man as lovely as you, this is the first time I ever knew the depths of Love. You encompass so much more than I ever dreamed of; you are Love, incarnate. You are Love’s precious garnet. JDS 07/07/08 |
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Very beautiful as always, Angel. Hope you had a great weekend. ![]() ![]() Thank you pkd ![]() And yes, I had a great wkend. Hope you did too! |
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Another great one Angel!!!
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Whether it be garnet or any other birthstone...I can see through any of them to see the beauty you put into words. Your analogies are so wonderful.
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are you an Aquarius ?
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(((Frank)))
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"You draw me into
your fire and I am purified, as fire so often does." That is hot! ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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"You draw me into your fire and I am purified, as fire so often does." That is hot! ![]() ![]() ![]() J, that is soooo funny ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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![]() Ty Tiff ![]() |
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Nice to meet you too. Though I do believe I've read some of your poetry before its been awhile since I've regularly visited the poetry forumn
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beautiful
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beautiful ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ((((calmguy)))) Ty. Nice to see you back ![]() |
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