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Topic: A Seasonal Gardener (seriously revised)
MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 07/05/08 09:11 AM
He A seasonal gardener Having had his share Of pretty flowers And foliage Cultivating them Lovingly For a brief Moment in time Leaving them Wilted and Withered From lack of care Drenched in the Stagnant air Of neglect Once the novelty Of their brilliant Colors and hues Have faded and Dissipated With Familiarity She A wild Exotic bud Flowering Shyly in new And fresh soil Her fragrant Petals gently Unfolding Under the Warm effect Of his hot house Gaze She dreams of Blooming Year round Nestled safely In his greenhouse Her existence Tenderly Gently Passionately Sustained and Nourished By his love His attention Caught By her unusual Essence He wonders Indifferently Impassively If perhaps this Uncommon Bit of Exotica Is one he might Tender Through A Season … or two … After all Seasons come And seasons go … When this Bright new Flower Has lost Her Bouquet And Bloom There’s always More room In his garden For his Seasonal … Transient … ……Blossoms ... @July 2008 awh

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MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 07/05/08 10:19 AM
(((MsWizard))) Nice!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 07/05/08 10:24 AM
Oh how my garden won't grow, years of seeds and Not even weeds Buds never bloom Rain never comes doom, doom doom. Flowers never show their face This is such a discrace. If only I didn't have This asphalt lot. Nice poem Ms Wizard......

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 07/05/08 12:44 PM
great revision...love the rhyming have faded and dissipated...what a wordsmith you are.

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 07/05/08 09:07 PM
(((MsWizard))) Nice! (((TEDDY))) Thank you sweetone!

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 07/05/08 09:08 PM
Oh how my garden won't grow, years of seeds and Not even weeds Buds never bloom Rain never comes doom, doom doom. Flowers never show their face This is such a discrace. If only I didn't have This asphalt lot. Nice poem Ms Wizard...... You sweet man...thank you MUAH!

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 07/05/08 09:09 PM
great revision...love the rhyming have faded and dissipated...what a wordsmith you are. Yes, I am happy with this one finally..I'm glad you liked it too you wonderful woman!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 07/05/08 09:10 PM
Have I told you lately just how amazing you are,,, Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm no,,, Oh my darling this is brilliant, full of life,,, You are so amazing

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 07/06/08 07:14 AM
I grew these flowers just for you darlin'....ty for your write...

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Sun 07/06/08 08:20 AM
Loved this one a flower in bloom that touches the heart

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 07/06/08 09:13 AM
Have I told you lately just how amazing you are,,, Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm no,,, Oh my darling this is brilliant, full of life,,, You are so amazing Thank you my lovely friend (((DENISE)))

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 07/06/08 09:14 AM
I grew these flowers just for you darlin'....ty for your write... Come 'ere you <<-----hugging her beautiful AngelFace

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 07/06/08 09:14 AM
Loved this one a flower in bloom that touches the heart Thank you Txy you sweet woman thing you~~~

beauty314 Joined Sat 04/19/08 Posts: 1709	Sun 07/06/08 03:32 PM
very beautiful

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 07/07/08 06:40 AM
very beautiful As are you...thank you

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TiffaIrishGirl Joined Tue 11/20/07 Posts: 1115	Mon 07/07/08 11:06 AM
what wonderful poem, thank you