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If She gives me a chance,
I will show her my world. If She lets me in, I want to see hers. If She will listen closely, she will hear my smiles. If She reads between the lines, she will see my truths. If She stumbles, I will catch her. If She opens her heart, she will never regret it. If She tells me something, I will keep it in my heart. If She wants me she need not go searching. If She is hurting, she knows I'll cry too. If She falters, I will run to console her. If She needs a hug, I will drop all to do that. If She smiles, it lightens my world. If She is scared, I will hold her all night. If She needs to talk, I will always listen. If She only knew how much I can, and will. If She If She If She If WE. ![]() |
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very sweet
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Thanks, Brooke
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I especially like the way you ended the piece... very unique.
"If She only knew how much I can, and will. If She If She If She If WE." ![]() ![]() |
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Thanks for the kind words, Angel. I left it open on purpose for both reader's interpretation, and for hers.
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"she" is one lucky chick.
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Thanks, Gurl. No, I'm the lucky one.
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I think you got all the "If She's" covered. Nice write.
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Thanks, Wolf.
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To everything you stated!
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very sweet, best to you both.
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Thanks, d4, and pkd
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nice write!!
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Thanks, Cowboy(?)..lol
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Edited by
ElaineSeekingJerry
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Mon 06/23/08 02:17 PM
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... luckIEST girl ever
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Thanks,P
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you sound like a keeper.
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