Topic: water color
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Mon 02/26/07 11:30 PM

when i emerge from the subway
from the dank dark underground
i find the early evening sky painting the city
with bright pastels that rain down

through my ignorance through my arrogance
i allowed time that i had caged for you to escape
now i have only few apologies surrounded by roses
that i hope will ease your wait

between the crowds that flow like an angry river
through the noise of the urban metal masses
i see you outside defying the cool wet air
your gentle lips sipping from one of two wine glasses

and though i am rushing to you
your very vision causes me to stand still
your femininity as you sit and watch the world
blurs my mind on what is real

that dress you think is so plain
is now worth more to me than gold
as it clings to your form
a form that i long to hold

my spirit is quickly shaken though
because you have just caught my eye
smelling the flowers you ask the reason i stare
but i could never explain to you why



venusrose's photo
Tue 02/27/07 06:08 AM
Amongst all the chaos in the world, you see true beauty. You painted a
very lovely picture of your sweet lady.flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 02/27/07 07:34 AM
Beautiful Painting flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 02/27/07 09:28 AM
Beautiful poem.

Morena350's photo
Tue 02/27/07 10:04 AM
another good poet!! is in tha house!!!!
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karmafury's photo
Tue 02/27/07 12:53 PM
Fantastic Poeticwolf.