Topic: the final putrifaction
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Sun 02/25/07 01:31 AM

you take me out
to show me off to your friends
but as we sit side by side you can see
i will never be like them

i casually rip them apart over dinner
as the wine is spilt blood red
my salivation burns like acid
rendering their conversations dead
and you look to me in anger
there is hatred in your stare
your friends have all grown silent
they regard me now in fear
see i am anti social
and i am untamed
if you thought you could somehow change me
then you too must be insane

Hotchikita's photo
Sun 02/25/07 01:40 AM
A other good poem poeticwolf.Keep them coming.

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Sun 02/25/07 01:46 AM
merci cher

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Sun 02/25/07 02:09 AM
Nice french. Ton francais est tres bon.:smile:

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Sun 02/25/07 02:21 AM
devil :wink: A fine wordsmith!

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Sun 02/25/07 02:22 AM
Wee-Wee- Mademizell--hee,hee..lol

Great Thoughts of a savage and voiceful presents,
I choose to have one near, who thinks of me so dear!:heart:

And as change, we cannot do. Just live life and love-it through.
:heart: flowerforyou :wink: drinker smokin

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Sun 02/25/07 02:38 AM
Tres beau poem poeticwolf:smile:

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Sun 02/25/07 02:44 AM
happy hey iam4u....
It's: Oui, Oui Mademoiselle...

venusrose's photo
Sun 02/25/07 04:35 AM
dark but a very good sequence of poems. should have a warning label
prior to readinglaugh
Now I need to burn some sage.smokin

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Sun 02/25/07 08:06 AM
another good onehappy flowerforyou happy happy

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Sun 02/25/07 10:09 AM
Poeticwolf,,,
I have truely enjoyed your poems
I hope you will post more
flowerforyou

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Sun 02/25/07 10:13 AM
that was wonderful nice work.happy happy flowerforyou
flowerforyou

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Sun 02/25/07 11:23 AM
Very nice bet they want try to change you again lol flowerforyou

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Sun 02/25/07 11:21 PM
ahh the final piece ...danger filled and mind gripping...I must read
more!!