Topic: the theory of reality | |
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exhibit a
walking with the scientist that lives inside my heart and the priest inside my mind i find again we are all locked in debate on how my reality should be defined suddenly a frog appeared in the grass i thought to myself how is it that it is alive at only one hundredth of my perception does it still exist when i close my eyes i smiled as the mystery deepened i reached for the frog but came up with a stone whatever destiny the frog held i would not know since i held the rock alone exhibit b i hefted this weight this solid piece of earth and i pondered if it had a life too i wondered of its spiritual worth but as i turned lost in my thoughts i fell to the side and sort of took a spill i was pitched down a steep embankment and came to rest in a sun soaked cornfield i then remembered the rock i dropped that fell from my grasp and into the air whatever destiny the stone held i would not know because i landed here exhibit c at the centered of this field was the corpse of an old scarecrow it lay in a shallow pond that was made from the seasons ebb and flow its tattered rags served as a net some tiny fish were within confined their entire reality existed here in a microscopic world so unlike mine i lifted their veiled barrier for a better look and watched them leave to my dismay whatever destiny the fish held i would not know since they swam away furthermore after my day of musing about this and about that after a bath and warm slippers by the fire i sifted through the facts i thought about the frog the stone the fish and about what each had shown but whatever destiny i held to them it would never be known in closing my reality is defined by me whether i open or close my eyes surly your reality would cease to be if by chance one day i died we are all single universes and every universe can effect but whatever destiny you hold i would never know if we had not met |
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Very good Poeticwolf. I really like this one.
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thank you
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Our perception of life...is it just an illusion? humm. Great
writing...making me think. |
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Hey PoeticWolf,
I like the connections you make between words, the way you try to draw a picture with less obvious words. Does your poetry flow or do have to picture each stanza first? Sometimes I don't even know what I'm going to write. I start with a thought and it flows. I actually have to read it myself to see what it says, like automatic writing. And sometimes, I write, cross out, move a line, add something, like I can't get it to join. Anyway, I enjoy reading your thoughts, thanks. |
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That is one beautiful piece of work
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