Topic: ...and the world grows..
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Sat 02/24/07 01:28 PM
Cold

From under my eyelids
I see the pain
Like freezing naked in the rain
Like looking for lost loves never found
Crossing your path feeling your frown
Heart's afire and minds ablaze
Trapped in this funereal mazed
Amazed at the darknes from such bright hearts
I can never seem to strike a spark
America land of depressed
Home of the lost and second guessed
We hide in our home afraid of US
Too tied down to make a fuss
Everyone wants love
But not today
Belief in innocence fades away
Drugs confuse and blot the mind
Everyone thinks that they are kind
Pushing each other farther away
Then wonder why its so cold today??
The rain you create will fall on you
Just as mine does slicing me into
The storms will come to clean your mind
Yet you will grow more frigid given time
Where are the cures for what we ail?
Where are the heroes who will then prevail?
Step outside just look around
What you seek... You .. HAve.. FOUND>> WILL

activemode's photo
Sat 02/24/07 03:08 PM
That's a nice piece of poetic therapy for me. We all want, but we don't
want. The world is a conundrum.

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Sat 02/24/07 09:54 PM
That is very true in alot of lives even if we don't want to admit
it(very good)flowerforyou

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Sat 02/24/07 10:03 PM
:smile: :heart: drinker NICE TO SEE AND READ, YOU WILL.
I hope your poems will flow through these pages, and help us all to see
through your eyes, life's many stages!! Good poem!!

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Sat 02/24/07 10:06 PM
Nice Will. It's easy to feel sorry for yourself, to be dark inside and
become cynical today. We are all so busy. But it's even better to be
reminded to look aroung, outside ourselves to see we are not sailing
these seas alone.

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Sat 02/24/07 10:07 PM
and it grows---

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Sun 02/25/07 09:01 AM
so true, good poem Will.

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Sun 02/25/07 09:50 AM
Nicely put. Thank you.

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Sun 02/25/07 11:26 AM
Very good one Will, love has more twist and turns than we care to admit
things never seem to go the way we want them too. Glad to see you back
hope you start posting some more. flowerforyou

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Tue 02/27/07 07:39 PM
Thank you guys..I have been looking again.. But it is extremely hard to
get people to open up.. WILLflowerforyou

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Mon 03/26/07 08:04 PM
bump

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Mon 03/26/07 08:09 PM
The Journey of life sometimes has
no answer,, just know that our lives
are pre-planned and God gives us what
he knows we can deal with,,, Patience
Life, Love and Happiness will find you flowerforyou

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Mon 03/26/07 08:12 PM
Thanks Denise..WILLflowerforyou

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Mon 03/26/07 08:15 PM


Very nice indeed Will....So very true!

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Tue 03/27/07 05:00 AM
Thanks again..WILL