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Topic: Hourglass
MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 06/15/08 04:18 PM Edited by MsWizard on Sun 06/15/08 04:18 PM
Old lace Fine wine Brushed silk The world mine Life simply sweet No cares or Tribulations No deeper meanings Unpleasant revelations A time of few trials Little discontent When I dreamt my Girlish dreams And I knew What love meant... Now with dreams Shattered My hourglass lay Scattered In shards Around my feet Blended With the Dissipating Sands of time While the Soft ashes Of my lost Loves Swirl gently Around me Like feathers Dancing In the wind... awh june 2008

rush2001 Joined Thu 04/17/08 Posts: 2577	Sun 06/15/08 04:22 PM


MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 06/15/08 04:23 PM
Awww thank you Rush How are you sweetpea?

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sun 06/15/08 04:23 PM
I can so relate to this...do we ever get back to the top part again? Or is innocence, once shattered, impossible? So sad.

beauty314 Joined Sat 04/19/08 Posts: 1709	Sun 06/15/08 04:32 PM
awesome awesome awesome

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 06/15/08 04:32 PM
I can so relate to this...do we ever get back to the top part again? Or is innocence, once shattered, impossible? So sad. There you are my lamb!!! I'm so glad you're back! I dont think we can ever go back....all we can do is try to hold onto our dreams darling ~

jonny63 Joined Sat 03/08/08 Posts: 5229	Sun 06/15/08 04:36 PM
You make it hard for us to be so far apart.

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 06/15/08 04:42 PM
awesome awesome awesome Thank you my Beauty~

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 06/15/08 04:47 PM
You make it hard for us to be so far apart. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 06/15/08 10:35 PM
"..While the Soft ashes Of my lost Loves Swirl gently Around me Like feathers Dancing In the wind..." That is so eloquently put

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Sun 06/15/08 11:02 PM
ooh i really like this one

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 06/15/08 11:05 PM
"..While the Soft ashes Of my lost Loves Swirl gently Around me Like feathers Dancing In the wind..." That is so eloquently put Thank you my Angelface~

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 06/15/08 11:05 PM
ooh i really like this one Thank you calmguy, I'm very glad you liked this one...

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sun 06/15/08 11:10 PM
Great visuals with the hourglass...very nice

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sun 06/15/08 11:26 PM
Great visuals with the hourglass...very nice Thank you Sweetie~

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LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 06/17/08 10:54 AM
As time pass's new Journey's await,, New Hope, Faith and Love Sand swept under the feet,, longing to be set free,,, We dream of Past, Present and hope that the Future will once again bring us back to the Familar we long for... Amazing you are just so Amazing...

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Tue 06/17/08 05:13 PM
As time pass's new Journey's await,, New Hope, Faith and Love Sand swept under the feet,, longing to be set free,,, We dream of Past, Present and hope that the Future will once again bring us back to the Familar we long for... Amazing you are just so Amazing... Hello darling Denise...where have you been? Are you well my lovely one?