the day had become just another forgotten war
with my soldiering ending
in the dim subway light

i could care less where the train would take me
but somehow i always ended up home

so many familiar faces around me
all of them
i would never know

with these neighboring worlds spinning just outside my reach
my thoughts drift across the tracks
across the universes
across to a mirror of hopeless wars
hopeless battles
that lie in another direction
with different enemies than my own

my thoughts fall upon the shores of a woman
she is so ordinary
she is so plain

i watch her sort out her past with her future
and briefly i am in love

too many nights like this have made her more aware
she sees me
i am easily captured

where is she going to a man who does not know she is god
to a man who does not long to feel her smile upon him
only taking his pleasure
in her pain

i need her
she must know that i need her

the trains of our destinies move between us
in a rush of warm air
i will never be with her again
until tomorrow

i like it,well done

thanks

Wow, that's beautiful!

very well spoken nice words poeticwolf.

awsum wolf,,great work soldier..