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Topic: What if?
Silkbutterfli Joined Mon 07/30/07 Posts: 1008	Tue 06/03/08 09:14 PM
What if you aren't who you say you are? What if I am not who I say I am? What if all the sweet words you have told me aren't true? What if all the sweet words I said back to you aren't true? What if when we finally meet, we aren't what we expected? What if when we finally meet, we are exactly what we hoped? What if we had never taken that chance? Life is full of what if's. Take the chances set before you. If you don't, you will always be asking, What if?

Lied2TimedSweetie Joined Tue 10/30/07 Posts: 158	Tue 06/03/08 09:15 PM
BEAUTIFUL!

peachiegirl28 Joined Sun 09/16/07 Posts: 19292	Tue 06/03/08 09:15 PM
amazing!!

miked36 Joined Tue 01/22/08 Posts: 23	Tue 06/03/08 09:15 PM
You find that alot on JSH!

maxxximus007 Joined Mon 11/13/06 Posts: 6082	Tue 06/03/08 09:16 PM


1956deluxe Joined Thu 12/06/07 Posts: 8559	Tue 06/03/08 09:16 PM
Nice.

now69 Joined Mon 06/02/08 Posts: 428	Tue 06/03/08 09:16 PM
very nice

mike1957 Joined Tue 01/08/08 Posts: 446	Tue 06/03/08 09:18 PM
a-men

Cambolaya65 Joined Mon 09/03/07 Posts: 5587	Tue 06/03/08 09:19 PM
very cool...

mrscupcake Joined Sun 04/27/08 Posts: 470	Tue 06/03/08 09:24 PM
wow very nice

No1sLove Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 10342	Tue 06/03/08 09:32 PM
That is very nicely said.

rara777 Joined Thu 10/18/07 Posts: 61408	Tue 06/03/08 09:55 PM
Very well stated.

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Tue 06/03/08 10:02 PM
What if? I said i liked what you wrote You go Gurl ooh! ooh! What if i said "You go Gurl!"

Silkbutterfli Joined Mon 07/30/07 Posts: 1008	Tue 06/03/08 10:55 PM
Thanks everyone.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 06/03/08 11:08 PM
What if I didn't read this? I would have missed out.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 06/04/08 04:07 AM
What if I didn't read this? I would have missed out. Ditto on that one!!! Cheers girlfriend. You're good!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 06/04/08 10:00 AM
What if...I never found you as a friend...I would never have a day to look forward too, a day without sunshine, a day of cloudy rain, a day to always wonder, what if...? You are doing great sweetie. Keep up the good writes.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 06/04/08 10:14 AM
What if the sun had never shown. What if i had never read your poem. Who would of known how fruitful it would be, you put the What if inside of me. Thank you i enjoyed your poem very much

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 06/04/08 04:12 PM
so true,very nice

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