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Topic: Why's
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 06/02/08 03:50 AM
Many faces hold their lies, many faces show their cries. Many days just asking all my whys So many days feeling all my loving, giving tries. Here watching reading my life pass-before-my-eyes.

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Mon 06/02/08 04:23 AM
nice wording, short and sweet Many faces hold their lies, many faces show their cries. Many days just asking all my whys So many days feeling all my loving, giving tries. Here watching reading my life pass-before-my-eyes.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 06/02/08 04:47 AM


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Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 06/02/08 06:49 AM
And life does pass us quickly. Nice little write.

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Mon 06/02/08 06:51 AM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 06/02/08 10:01 AM
A NEW BABY,,,,SO CUTE,,,,,,SO PRECIOUS,,,,,,and I will guess,,,YOUR A GRANDPA,,,,WHOOOOOO HOOOOOOOO YEAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! WOW man,,Steven you are NOW old,lol,lol,lol,just teasing... I hope you and the whittle one get to ROCK-ON for a long-long time bro!!! HERS to BABIES and LIVING LIFE LARGE MAN....

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Mon 06/02/08 10:40 AM
This is short and to the point T good one!

lifestooshort6 Joined Mon 12/31/07 Posts: 6667	Mon 06/02/08 10:42 AM
very nice

No1sLove Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 10342	Mon 06/02/08 11:08 AM
Nice!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 06/02/08 11:27 AM
"..Many days just asking all my whys So many days feeling all my loving, giving tries. Here watching reading my life pass-before-my-eyes" Wow. Intense.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 06/02/08 10:54 PM
Good Write.

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