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Topic: Lessons in History
Zero_Effected Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 18395	Sat 02/10/07 05:46 AM
Born unto this world I emerge alone The path I walk, I stumble along To destinations unknown.. The misery I keep Is but my own The challenges of life Are hurdles crossed The burdens I bear Crush my laden spirit Squelching the fires Of light within Staving off the laughter and love Holding me prisoner So as NOT to repeat Lessons… in History!! (copyright protected) NB: my poetry is NOT to be tagged, added to OR used in any way without my express consent. Thank you for your respect! Z

DANE1973 Joined Sat 12/23/06 Posts: 2136	Sat 02/10/07 05:50 AM
Well spoke, My dear Lady Queen.And thine poem speaketh as well.

Zero_Effected Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 18395	Sat 02/10/07 05:55 AM
my thanks Sir Dane... your words are well come z nods her head in acquiescence

whispertoascream Joined Fri 11/17/06 Posts: 22844	Sat 02/10/07 06:00 AM
Very nicely written your magisty. Thank you for sharing.

herewego Joined Wed 10/11/06 Posts: 10755	Sat 02/10/07 06:01 AM
my Queen, beautiful words..

Zero_Effected Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 18395	Sat 02/10/07 06:02 AM
thank you my loyal subjects !!! your words of encouragement are truely appreciated

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76438	Sat 02/10/07 06:47 AM
Very goood Z you should post more often

Zero_Effected Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 18395	Sat 02/10/07 06:49 AM
thanks txs... we'll see k??

pb111 Joined Sat 02/10/07 Posts: 3	Sat 02/10/07 07:55 AM
All women are not Queens I know that, but this woman has a Queens in her heart I begin again. It is like verse of minstrels in an ancient voice it fills up my time. I speak in forecast well enough, the desires you wear forecasts also, we could not meet and speak of storms it is to recall that at one time we watched a storm. come in over the land tempest that comes from day to night before the spectacle is our lives

lionsbrew Joined Tue 08/22/06 Posts: 14232	Sat 02/10/07 07:57 AM
very nice z:D

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Sat 02/10/07 08:10 AM
Nice poem Z... hey pb111... didn't she sak for NO TAGS???

Gryphyn Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 3031	Sat 02/10/07 08:15 AM
Its been a while since I studied history, yet I feel this time history doesn't repeat itself. Great reminder Z. Thank you. G

Zero_Effected Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 18395	Sat 02/10/07 09:22 AM
thanks for the DISrespect PB... well.. that ends MY poetry postings... and guess that answer's yer question TXs.. thank you Gryph & Mikie.. appreciate you're support !! Lion.. awwwwwww.. thanks dude.. you look GREAT with that new doo

herewego Joined Wed 10/11/06 Posts: 10755	Sat 02/10/07 09:35 AM
PB11 i can't believe that you disrespected zero like that. that is the worse thing you could have done. she asked for no tags, but you chose to ignore her and do a tag anyways. you have hurt a very special friend of mine. z.. your poem is beautiful.. don't let that person get you down.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 02/10/07 09:37 AM
(((Z))) Very nice Poem

karmafury Joined Sun 11/12/06 Posts: 10156	Sat 02/10/07 09:37 AM
Very nice Z. I like it. Pb, perhaps you should read all that's wtitten there. It was requested that yhere be not tags, add ons, etc.

Zero_Effected Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 18395	Sat 02/10/07 09:42 AM
thanks LAmom for taking the time wego.. karma.. thank you my friends.. for you're support AND appreciation of my work.. I WAS testing the waters with this first one.. but I guess these are shark infested waters.. and sharks scare me

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 02/10/07 09:45 AM
((Z)) I hope you ignore the Sharks and the inconsiderate I would like to read more... Denise

Zero_Effected Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 18395	Sat 02/10/07 09:56 AM
thanks LA.. perhaps once the anger and disappointment of being disprected subside I perhaps will.. but this is just another horrid example of being crushed and having the fires squelched I'm afraid..

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 02/10/07 09:57 AM
Well then my Dear I will stand close and await your return (((Z)))